Oh, it looks like the screams were back…
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Yep they are
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What the hell had he done this time!?

He better not be using that Pine Tree kid as a puppet again.
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He is not, it is much worse than that

"Hey, Glow Bug! You'll never guess what I did to Pine Tree today!"

"I'm sure it's very horrifying and upsetting."

"Well now I don't even want to tell you."

A sigh. "…What did you do to Pine Tree today, Bill?"

"I possessed his body and nearly killed his twin!"

"What."
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Well that was very not subtle

really good, I hope you create a sequel!

WOW. What a powerful and tragically inevitable ending. Love that Bill stayed true to Billthat temper, man. And that power hungry mean streak. Evil can't understand good.

Another excellent chapter. :) Really have enjoyed this story. Hope to see a sequel in the future.

No it can't be over yet it's so good Bill x FemDanny forever

I like it. I want another. (Smashes cup)

Wait... That's it?

aw, i was hoping for a different ending. something like "years later" where bill shows up again and only Danny knows about it. how maybe they go off together. maybe an epilogue?

Okay. I usually stay away from relationship type stuff, but it's low key enough that it's really very endearing. And I love how you've written the scenes and blended them so nicely with your own, can't wait for more!

I have a feeling Bill is going to be in BIG trouble XD

I'm liking where you're going with this. Keep up the good work! I'm another note, here's some prompts:

Power/Anger is Hot/Attractive
- Danny intimidates/yells Bill into Submission(he did
say that pain is halarious)
- Danny beats ghost enemies into submission
- Danny beats Bills subordinates into Submission
Power/Anger/Geometric Corners are Hot
- The suit she uses to defeat Pariah Dark could come
into play. It also could be said to look a little bit like
bricks is more geometric has corners and sharp
angles. Bill likey
Wulf can create portals owes Danny a favor
Bill could invade Danny's mindscape even outside
gravity falls
Danny's human form could provide resistance to
harmful demon energy
Bill is the Devil: extrapolate, Possible nickname
morningstar
The Ones Left Behind:
- What is the family doing?
- Have sam, tucker, and jazz told about 1/2 ghost
Danny to explain disappearance to parents?
- How many people/ghosts know about the actions
of the observants? Are they scared it'll happen to
them too?
- If the ghosts know, does Vlad? Does he have
enough of a heart to tell those in the know about
her double identity what happened to Danny?
- What was Clockwork doing all this time? Is he a
dead time 'giant'? Does he exist in this dimension?
Does he forsee that they'll 'hook up'? Does he
convince the Observants to impliment this
particular, unusual punishment to steer the future?
For what purpose? To prevent the success of both
Danny's and Bill's and to console them.
Pariah Dark
- If Danny defeated Pariah Dark, does this make her
the sort-of queen of the ghost zone?
The Observants
- Do they punish Danny to prevent a distruction of the
ghost zone?
- Do they punish her to get rid of a potential new
queen who would start off where Pariah stopped
And/or someone who has, the potential to be very
powerful?
- Are they racists who don't like the idea of an
"unnatural" 1/2 ghost and the political headache
that causes?
- Do they choose this unusual punishment to kill her
ghost half and human half both, because traditional
'deaths' might just turn her full ghost?
Is it possible to turn Danny completely human again?
Can she survive without her ghost half?
What is the difference between ghosts and demons?
Are there other dimensions just for creatures like
them, like angels or gods?

That's all for now, can't wait to see your next update!

OH MY GOD, PLEASE CONTINUE THIS SOON!

This is one of the best, most awesomest, most well detailed one I have seen yet! Please, please, please write more. I really want to know what happens next. Please, I will beg you on my hands and knees to you!?

Have Danny tell bill off like "bill what have you done this time!?"