Plz continue the story! Of you’re having writers block, here’s an idea: After a week or 2 of being missing, Randy returns to school(with Theresa, of course) and when Heidi sees that her plan has failed, she walks to Randy and Theresa in anger and basically blows this case wide open and exposes her plans forgetting that Theresa was there too and on and on (and it goes on and on and onnnn yeah xD)

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is this a repeat? By the way...THIS IS BRUCE SO FAR! Please more!

When chapter 20 is coming

So..

pls hurry!

Yay I am so glad to sign in back to fanfiction and read this story.

This my favorite story please continue

I love your story it a soooooo great and is probably my fav fowlham story

they have no questions about this at all?

The characters are out of character, the plot's forgettable, the grammar is horrible. This isn't a good story, it's a bad one. It's like a kid doing a project on the night before it's due, rushed and messy. Its as if you have a lot of potential to start writing but when you do start writing you just throw it out the window and just want to get it over with. This is bad and messy.

The characters are out of character, the plot's forgettable, the grammar is horrible. Over all this isn't a good story, it's a bad one. It looks like you have potentinal but as soon as you start, you just throw it out the window and just try to get it over with like a child who's doing a project the night before it's due. At this point it's like you don't care about it and yo just eant

The characters are out of character, the plot's forgettable, the grammar is horrible. This isn't a good story, it's a bad one. It's like a child doing a project on the night before it's due. It's rushed and messy. It's like you have a lot of potential for this story but once you begin writing you just throw it out the window and want to get this done as soon as possible, not wanting to correct mistakes you claim you "went over".

:)