rather than shonen it is more like a shoujo manga

Really good job I enjoyed the story

Why is Naruto so weak in this? Lol.

Good job.

It was an interesting premise, but Natuto is an OC in everything but name and a few techniques.

Have you considered on revisiting this fic and publishing a few new chapters? I'd love to see this proceed at least to the end of RWBY season 1. Fire it is, by far, one of my favorites.

Where are you hiding :)
Come out!

This is really wonderful.. The romance is so beautiful. Tsundere with ice powers, match made in heaven. You depicting it beautifully too. All the scenes and interaction between characters are clear and realistic. And really heartfelt.
Nice work.. Looking forward for more.
One of the best naruto X rwby read so far

Honestly the best naruto x rwby crossover I have read. Maybe second only to RMS, the romance aspect is down great with no unnecessary angst or drama and it seems real and developed.

Awesome story! Can’t wait for more!

That thing with Blake makes sense. Thinking back on it to the best out knowledge Sun and Penny were the only ones that could tell that Blake was a Faunus right off the bat.

But from how its written her speed most be clearly S-class if War arc Naruto cant handel it. Wtf?

Or is it Weiss-Cream?

Weiss cold

Interesting, but why is Naruto digging a deeper hole for himself.