plz an issei x reader

The only tiny said is that you accidentally put in Diaz's name at the start instead of Koneko but other than that this was a fantastic lemon

Hello! It's been about 2 years since you've last updated, but I thought I'd throw my review in here anyway. I like this! Your writing is terrific grammatically, and it has lots of details (including a mini backstory summary)! This fic is sweet and lighthearted. However, the way everyone speaks and acts is a bit unrealistic and cliché. Try connecting your emotions with what the characters are experiencing, it'll make the story more heartfelt to read.

For example, instead of, "Don't worry, Rias. I actually like the way you smell. Kind of addicting, if you ask me."

Write it more smoothly, like,
"It's alright, Babe. You smell amazing." Or something like that! Every writer adds a little bit of themselves, so don't be afraid to do the same!

This was a lovely read, regardless! 3 3

Does issei get a Ferrari in the series?

Hey for this being your first I found it amazing

ok can i take it

The story is great

ill do it

yessss

Hey This is SSGSS Ishiko here. I just wanted to say that the story was excellent. I'd be honored to adopt it if someone hasn't already. I know it's been about a year or two since you posted this note, so I just wanted to check in. Like I said: I'll gladly take it if someone hasn't already. I plan on writing future stories with lemons, since one of my crossovers I plan to have will be DxD related. Just get back to me if you see this. I would like the approval. Thanks!

This was very good my friend and it's a shame you couldn't continue but good luck

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Where's chapter 4?
I am loving your lemon fanfic but I have noticed it's been over a year since last update

More pleaa so far I'm enjoying this

I think that that was really good. Keep writing this series to the end.