Oh come on! Where's the rest of this story? It looks fantastic so far. Wish you had kept going with it.

UPDATE IT'S BEEN CENTURIES BRUTHA! :D

I want more lol he's so troll

P.S. ignore the SomeoneWithTasteDoA review, that disgusting waste of space person is known for leaving scathing review on incomplete stories that are not updated recently. That person is truly spiteful, probably used to have uncompleted stories and get terrible reviews for it and now leave hurtful reviews for any author who do an incomplete story.

Guests who are being insulting, shut the fuck up and freaking LEAVE, nobody force you to stay and read, IDIOTS. Insulting the author is NOT a criticism, it just petty, only bullying to soothe your own ego.

Now author, this is an amazing story and its really well written, so ignore those freaking idiots who strive to insult others so they can feel good about themselves, they're nothing but a waste of space. Focus on the good not the bad. A lot of uncompleted stories? Who freaking care? A lot of great authors dont always complete their load of stories! Like Tsume Yuki! So many wonderful stories are posted to share because we delight in reading a wonderful fanfic and they delight in ours whether our list of favorites or our written stories. They did it because of us, themselves and their MUSES that just come and go.

So fucking ignore those lazy spiteful, basement-dwelling idiots, okay, author?

Kill yourself idiot.

Why would they attack her familiar? This is fucking stupid.. Every familiar is dangerous, dragons aren't rare summons and they can easily eat all those students, yet they aren't attacked. Do you know why? Because the familiar summon is sacred for them, so this entire thing is simply stupid.

You don't start a paragraph with anyways, or at least shouldn't. Also, in writing the more correct form is anyway

I dont see why people are all angry about this story. Maybe for it only have 2 chapters. ? I dunno

Great idea but a bad start. Not surprising since I’ve seen mistakes made every single time I decide to come here on fan fiction. Are you sorry for giving us this shit? No. And it’s not surprising.

this is just no a big no.
bye

Please continue this

Please update this soon

Please continue this

What's the point in starting all those stories? You obviously don't have the ability to finish a single one. Stop, for all our sakes.