Reviews for Children of the Flame: Outtakes
TheWateringWizard chapter 1 . 3/13/2017
Haha that was great!
Nik1627 chapter 2 . 12/17/2015
Ya! Ur quidditch writong is really amazing! Sad u were over with it!
Firestorm2004 chapter 2 . 12/14/2015
Ah, fun. Very fun. And I believe the broom is the only reason Charlie won. Between Harry's and Ginny's skills, there is no competition. Sorry Charlie.

Keep up the excellent work, and I'm off to the story.
scrappy8 chapter 2 . 12/12/2015
great job
Schori123 chapter 2 . 12/12/2015
Nice presents they got!
I imagined Ginny flying through the windows of the tree house, completely insane! How can you pull off such an stunt, you just have to be Ginny or Harry, i suppose.
Keep your work up
Best regards
cameron1812 chapter 2 . 12/12/2015
Dedicated outtakes. Cool:) You do flying well.
Gin110881 chapter 1 . 12/8/2015
She should have asked, if a second kick is covered by the punishment.
scrappy8 chapter 1 . 11/27/2015
great job
cameron1812 chapter 1 . 11/13/2015
Don't know how I missed this. Ooogh. Delicious. She's a firecracker.
JC70s chapter 1 . 10/28/2015
I wonder if Michael's family jewels were found already? KKKKKKKKKKKK!
Wonderful outtake! Sorry but I am still laughing! I am so hurt!
Love her conversation with Prof McGonagall. "Anything else, Professor?" Sweet!
Thank you!
hptrump chapter 1 . 10/26/2015
That was awesome!
whytry7 chapter 1 . 10/26/2015
Haha thank you for this!
Firestorm2004 chapter 1 . 10/26/2015
I'm so glad you decided to post this. Having read your latest chapter, I was hoping you'd completely describe what had happened. And it was great.

Keep up the excellent work. I look forward to more.
MickJ chapter 1 . 10/26/2015
a very nice snippet. could have easily been inside the main story, but I can understand if it wasn't for streamlining reasons.
Schori123 chapter 1 . 10/26/2015
Great Outtake!
How could he say that Ginny cheated on him. Naturally it's hard to understand under the circumstances that she just vanished and can't explain where to. But Michael should trust her and don't call her on that...
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