my mistake i did see the cross over, i do apologize for that

this is an amazing story, but the one line you said in the first part.

"it was a world of queer animals and wacky places." ...? idk why i feel like you missword what wonderland is. i'm a huge wonderland fan, i have played both alice games and read all the books and seen the Disney movie.
i dont think the world queer is the right chose, it just upsets me.
and 2nd, when you are using ' ' its ment for thoughts of the characters mind. this is " " is for the talking you should get that right the next time you start a story.

and third i didnt see any cross over marked down, which you should have done, kingdom hearts and alice madness returns crossover, you should fix that

Loved it.

Awww poor Alice I wish he would of gotten together with her, she only has her wonderland and no one else.

Can you get Alice to cross paths with the keyblade wielders? It would be funny to see Alice awkwardly met in another world as she fights.