Goddamn, wasn't that one hectic fic? And no, no, not bad 'hectic,twas goood 'hectic.'

I felt so many emotions whilst reading. The fact that you derive that from me (i'm dead inside :P) is absolutely amazing. (not joking, never feel much emotions anymore)

Anyways, good job!

Damn... That got dark. Anyways, what happened to the father after that?

My heart's dying of Papyrus-ness... owo

The fact that Papyrus reverted to his childlike self only represents the childhood he'd lost along the way... Sans, is Sans. He's epic.

Megalovania intensifies

This is an amazing story. It is the most emotional Undertale fanfic I have read. I loved it every step of the way.

Can't wait to see the fan stuff.

Hello there! I am writing to ask you if I can make an animated series of this on YouTube? I may just be a beginner with Flash, but this fanfiction deserves to be a movie, if the fact that I've read this at least five times says anything about it.

Hoi! I'm here to tell you that this is probably the best undertale fan fiction Ive read and believe me when i say Ive read a lot. and i hope you update soon! :)

Charlette's Web

That was a very impressive story. Your style is very well developed and fluid, moving from one scene to the next, but there was a drawback I noticed to your fluidity: I lost track of the point of view from time to time. Aside from that and a few missed or extra words here and there your work is flawless. Your ability to capture the personality of the characters early on and then unfold it to what we know from the game was astounding and may have been one of the best parts of the story: drawn out character progression. Your descriptive detail was very thorough, a welcome change in the fanfic community, and your lengthy writing seems to know no bounds. Short chapters are fine, but they lead to short scenes; you however chose to delve into the nitty gritty of the scenes and not just gloss over them. As far as fanfics go, this is nothing short of a masterpiece and I thank you for sharing it with us.

The Sage of Water,
~ConGie

Wow, I wasn't expecting that! Yeah it got dark in a hurry.

...

Damn

what that crazy you can't find all 12 zodiac at the same time

Feb15th? THAT'S MY LITTLE SISTER'S BIRTHDAY! ROCK ON! :D

I uh...don't really know what to feel about this chapter, to be honest.
It's like
Dang
What could have happened if they never fell into the underground
Just
Dang.
I'm speechless