This story was really good! It’s an interesting concept and the execution was also handled well. I like that America is shown to be pretty smart and competently heroic in the hostage situation while also being a bit hot-headed and taking risks when perhaps he shouldn’t be. Also really liked seeing Prussia and Canada working together. It makes sense that the countries would have a lot of military experience and that came across here. I don’t know too much about how what happened would be handled in real life but it read realistically to me, and the dynamic the characters had working together before even meeting each other came across well. It seems like there was a lot of effort put into cleaning up the story before posting and it shows. Thanks for such an enjoyable read. Definitely one of my new favorites on this site

Agh, so nice.

The interactions between the micronations are so cute!
And I hugged myself when America and Canada recognized each other. Yay! Best! Brothers!

This reminds me of Call of Duty. Seriously, I'm not kidding.

This is Texas, not the Arctic! The closest they have to cold weather animals are dogs with strangely heavy coats!"

I can’t even argue, that’s spot on what Texas cold is.

Okay story. But America is very ‘hero.’ Too hero. Very centered on him.

Oh hey there is a sequal! Cool! Alfred seems to be settling in nicely. Which is good, but what ever happened to the classes he was enrolled in?

So the organization isn’t quite gone yet... is there a sequal? And Alfred missed out on a family, how sad...

Wow, would you nations cool it with the plotting over there? And I’m reasing this a second time and still trying to figure out if Alfred is like me and 96% jokes, or if the things he says are entirely serious.

Chapter from Hell or not, I liked it, your final result was incredibly satisfying.

I love everything in this chapter, Prussia, the character interactions, its so well done, I just love it so much!

Canada’s terrifying. Snipers, my family’s filled with them. My great great uncles all dies in WW2 and my abuelito was a cop, me and my brother have awesome aim, but my brother’s better than me. He hasn’t missed a the center of a target in over two years. If I remember what happens next correctly, then theres a lot of blood and an angry ancient.

Whoop whoop, good chapter, awesome chapter continuing on because I love this story so flipping much!

I like Canada and Prussia’s dynamic, they seem like great friends, and I thoroughly enjoy their banter. Alfred and Nick have a great dynamic as well, and Alfred has a point.

I feel like Alfred and Nick are going to be very close.