Okayyyy I guess its alright he didnt get his butt kicked. lol

YES! Jacob and Angela are purrrrrfect!

I still wish she would kick his ass lol

I hope she kicks his ass

SO I never read this sone either, but so far he's a total dickwad. Of course.. he already is so.. #shrug lol

Honestly I was uncomfortable reading this, but i have a thing where I cant leave a book half finished so I trudged on. Its not a bad premis if a little sadistic, and everyone is extremely ooc. And they are all bullys. I mean I grew to dislike bella but she was only part of that.
I dont know the characters where not likeable at all and i never thought I would root for the antagonist. The only one I did like was the dog.
I would say what i think of the mindset of the writter but that would be disrespectful.
I just did not enjoy the two hour it took to read this. If my ocd would let me I would have put it down.
I hope that you do not make a habit of making your protagonist so malicious in future work beacuse you are not a bad writer. You show promise and I hope you get thru whatever in your life that has such a dark hold on you.
The oc's power is cool tho, wish she got to use it more.
The doggo was the best part.

This is honestly one of my favorite books on hereI love it, good job!

Erm, is she going to use her power?

I love this. There isn't enough female vampire X Edward out there. it gets annoying when I see hundreds of human Edward romances so it's good for a fresh look on the story.

YANDERE EDDIE
And that was some strong wooing if you can actually call it that.
That's new. But awesome!

That was good, I can't wait for another twilight can it be a volturi this time

Jacob should not end up with Bella. Both are immature and Bella is obsessed with Eddiekins here

urgh
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