It was a beautiful story! I was longing for a second part. The recount

Love it

I hope you continue with this. it is good

You're most welcome, and I will be the first to say that all the hard work is paying off. Having Lucy doing her mental gymnastics and then presuming Junelle is after her is a true stroke of believable genius in this case I do believe. Now Lucy has a plausible reason to flee Laxus and it is all in her own paranoid mind which would totally fit Lucy's personality since she knows she's a trouble magnet after so many kidnappings and the rest of it during her time in Fairy Tail. Hehehe. The thing I'm waiting to read is when Laxus recalls her last name is Heartfilia and he manages to put two and two together to get the right answer and decides to go after said spitfire because she dared to lie to him about not having a surname. Heheheh. Cannot wait to see what you come up with next for this story. Thanks for all your hard work.

i think the only inconsistency is that her last name is actually said during the GMG (which is prior to the Tartaros arc) announcements.

Otherwise not a bad story.

Really great chapter. Love it! So can't wait to read the NE t one. I'm so happy that you've ci tinted with it!

I enjoyed this chapter. The awkward starts and stops, and the rest of it felt very much true to how Laxus would react. Nicely done. I really hope that these two are able to stay in touch and help each other through the shock of the guild disbanding. I'd like to see Lucy keeping her smile a bit more than she is at the moment. Will be looking forward to new updates as the real world allows.

I like the fact that Laxus finally realized Lucy needs some kind of covering. Only took two whacks to get his mind to functioning the way it should. ROFL. The only real surprise is the fact he didn't develop a nose bleed so hard it made him fly backwards with the way he was staring at Lucy's naked bod. Wonder what on earth is going on with Virgo's odd behavior? Sis she try to do something for Lucy and it backfired badly or something so Virgo thought she killed her key holder? I mean it totally feels like the spirit thought she was looking at Lucy's ghost for a lack of a better explanation.

Also, I am completely lost as to how Lucy ended up on Tenrou island in the Nude when the last thing we saw was her sitting on a park bench for crying out loud! Please Explain how Lucy got to Tenrou ASAP! Please? My mind can come up with numerous ideas from slavers through a messed up spirit gate drop scenario that would end with Lucy on Tenrou, but I have no idea what happened for certain and it is very frustrating. Right now I am feeling like you forgot to post a chapter or two making it much harder to figure out this huge gap in the story line.

okay; laxus wants to find this person named lucifer... lucy is on tenrou island... naked... laxus has to go on this mission solo, his team has a mission of their own... lucy doesnt know why she is in a state of undressed... he was handed a book and it was suggested to him he contact the first, mavis... very good how you saved the lucy section for the last... dont know if theyll meat again... if laxus has to go to tenrou island to look up the first or not... how is lucy going to get off the island... will she have to ask mavis to get her off the island... puzzles, wonders, and confusion... cool...

poor lucy, she did nothing to disband fairy tail... it just happened... sometimes things happen, like the fall of fairy tail... the angst of her thoughts is heart breaking... what she and laxus do now is anyones guess... will he get back together with his old team? will she get a job with an accounting firm how about becoming a waitress or hostess for one of those high class restaurants? she could become a minor mage if the two golden keys are all she has... belong to another guild... another cliff hanger... its okay...

poor laxus, having motion sickness can be a bummer... will she tell him her last name... will he remember that dance that helped her escape... will she be grateful for that escape or think he got her to admit that she had a secret like he did... very good the dialogue on the train... she and he have thoughts they can share but they arent aware of it... the damage done to them because of their fathers is great but they grew in spite of it... bravo lucy and laxus... you have the world ahead of you if you only learn to admit your problems... another cliff hanger... i like it...

that was ackward but sweet... lucy thanking laxus for frying the lady with the multi-hair fetish, getting back at her for hurting lucy... so fairy tail disbanded... that is not what i would like to have happen... why is laxus hurting like he is... what happened? another cliff hanger... my friend seems to want to give me cliff hangers most of the time... i can get through this... i enjoy this...OUCH... i think that is more accurate than anything else... laxuss booboos and lucys heart... in having to say goodbye to the fairy tail guild... hopefully, the many hurts that the guild mates are feeling now will be resolved... i can hope...

WOW, this is an intriguing way for laxus to meet lucy... being one of four bodyguards but letting her go is how it should be... this is the first time i read one of your chapters... excellent... the way they sway to the music... the way laxus lets her go... the way... very moving... i must read more of what you wrote... you have a unique way to bring things together... bravo... must read more of your work...

Nice to see you back in action. I thought you had abandoned this tale. Glad to see you have not.

On to the review: Looks like Laxus has stumbled into something rather strange with his mission. Sounds like Lucifer is a sadist who likes to hurt people for his own pleasure. No telling why such a troll is doing these things, but I am intrigued none the less. Wonder how Lucy got to Tenrou? I could see her training to master her new water magic and discovering an unknown star dress as the catalyst in this be fascinating to see how she responds once Laxus arrives to consult Mavis. I'm quite looking forward to that scene.

I wonder what will happen when Lucy meets Laxus on Tenrou Island? :D I also wonder is Lucy Lucifer, or will Lucy be the next on his target list? Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next update xx