| Reviews for Undertale: After Freedom |
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I.M chapter 33 . 1/5 Lazy Sadist lol Sans: “...” |
I.M chapter 15 . 1/5 Papyrus: “I killed him...” Sans: “Well, yes but actually yes.” |
SnowdinMouse chapter 69 . 3/20/2019 That pun in the last sentence though! Brilliant work, brilliant! |
Screeeeeeech chapter 1 . 7/22/2018 AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW THIS IS PRECIOUS! Im trying to come up with constructive criticism but cant! ITS ADORABLE. The only flaw I can find is the lack of paragraphs and it not being fully clear which characters perspective it is from. |
Guest chapter 69 . 6/19/2018 I wanna cat that can kill god. . . sounds cool. Awesome story by the way! I love it! |
Craftysdeadacc chapter 69 . 6/1/2018 I loved the story...i guess you won’t be updating? |
Guest chapter 58 . 4/21/2018 I forgot to add that toriel was a bit if a bitch in this. She too was at fault for what happened in the underground. She even admitted here that she was just having asgore as a scrapgoat and she didnt even apologise? |
Guest chapter 58 . 4/21/2018 Welp apparently gaster was still bad n abit insane, but i still cant imagine frisk being alright to just leave gaster without his own happy ending. Especially when they forgave chara even after they went batshit crazy and killed both frisk n toriel. What also happened with that issue of sans letting frisk fall to their death if it wasnt for the convinient muffet appearance? |
Guest chapter 33 . 4/21/2018 Honestly, what? Why would frisk actually be willing to sacrifice gaster even if its for asriel. I dont this frisk here be willing to let anyone die. Especially when gaster seems pretty sad, sure he was a jerk at first, but he turned out pretty alright in the end, asking frisk to take care of them and giving his soul for asriel. Im just so confused and upset |
Guest chapter 69 . 12/16/2017 This is the best UT fanfic ive ever read pleasssssseeeeeee continue |
Guest chapter 69 . 11/27/2017 Plz continue this story. IT FILLS ME WITH DETERMINATION. |
xirone538olympus chapter 9 . 11/22/2017 Ayyyy last chapter mentioned Markiplier and now Steven Universe! I applaud you, Author. ~ |
Enthusiastic chapter 69 . 8/9/2017 The pun at the end got me XD But tibia honest, SANS HAS USED TIBIA JOKES OVER 3 TIMES ME AND PAPYRUS HAVE A BONE TO PICK WITH THAT SKELETON |
Enthusiastic chapter 58 . 8/9/2017 What happened to Papyton and Sansiel? Frisk is sad (-_-) |
Enthusiastic chapter 50 . 8/9/2017 "... You were the one that made them kill anything and everything they came across; like some sort of sick puppet-master. Don't gimme that look, you know what you did. And, I know that a lot of you try to blame it on Chara. Well, guess what? Chara wasn't the one pressing the buttons on your keyboard, were they? They weren't the one that would try and skip past my dialogue or save the pie until facing Asgore. That was all you, and because humans don't like taking responsibility for their actions, you blame it on poor little Chara because they called themself a demon. If you ask me, pal, you're the real demon here." EXACTLY, SANS. YOU MAY BE REALLY BAD AT PROTECTING FRISK, BUT I LOVE YOU SANS. |