Please keep writing this.

I read the previous version and I loved it. I hope I'll come to love this version just as much. I already like the small changes I noticed (Kakashi as a romantic prospect as opposed to a distant cousin). I did notice that in chapter one Lord Akikiro's dire wolf is called Frost and Rinku's is called Ghost. In chapter two, you called Rinku's dire wolf Frost. Anyways I'll hope you update soon.

Ive tried reading this before but even now it seems in need of some editing. I had issues with the repeated chapters (dont know if there was extra on the end) and the strange lack of continuity. Eg. Her clan got slaughtered then suddenly she is running a pack in kiri. I love this concept and the way it has developed but it is too inconsistent for me to continue reading. Continue working on it, there is never enough oc kiri stories.

Ahh! Love this story, I can't wait to read what happens next! I hope there's more if kisame!

" sometimes the past can always find you"
that makes no sense, always or sometimes dont go together

Awesome chapter looking forward to the next update :) Glad Naruto and Gaara will get the love of friends and family :3

That was awesome! Really looking forward to your next chapter :)

This look interesting to read update soon but take your time

I didn't want to read this fix for a while after I realized Kisame didn't join them, but then I couldn't help but keep wondering what happened next, and I have to say I'm glad I continued reading. Despite some spelling mishaps your overall plot and dialogue more than make up for it, please continue with the good work.

This is a pretty good Zabuza/oc story! Its hard to find those! Keep up the Great Work!

THis is a pretty neat story! keep up the great work!

She's the real mvp and I'm shedding a few tears for her

i like the story so far, but i did notice a few things that seemed off. mostly just using the wrong words in some areas like gage instead of gag, but the biggest inconsistency i found was the Asian man calling an American woman a foreigner in her own country. it doesn't matter if she's in China town, she's also in New York City. if anything HE'S the foreigner here. that aside, i think this story has potential so I'm looking forward to reading more of this!

Please update soon i cant wait for the next chapter!

sorry...you said onee-san instead of onii-san a couple of times, and the constant point of view change s a little confusing