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Alexsanderlay chapter 17 . 5/24 please update soon it will be even more interesting |
James Birdsong chapter 17 . 3/25 Splendid chapter |
Stephen chapter 17 . 3/24 What Happened After That And Please Update The Story Soon. |
LightSpecter141 chapter 17 . 3/19 I'm wondering if you're open to adding Pokemon to this story? |
gunman chapter 17 . 3/18 Well, that was a fun read. Mostly At the characters working together, interacting, and such. And traveling through the orher realms was interesting. Rei and the others coming to Shinjis aid was nice to see. And yes, the Misato-Taki fight was to be expected. Mostly at how they are being treated as well as what they have put Shinji through. But no one in NERV knew anything about the other kingdoms, and what's more is that they were rather desperate because of the machinations of SEELE. Not saying they shouldn't be treated that way, just not so harshly. Gendo is a different matter. As for Uzume, I think she and Shinji and maybe even Rei should take down Evil-Lena together. I don't think they can take her individually. That said, good job on this. Look forward to more. Write on. |
Guest chapter 17 . 3/17 Well this is one wild ride of a fanfic. Very entertaining as well. |
James Birdsong chapter 16 . 3/17 You did well |
Tiber Septim26 chapter 8 . 9/24/2019 (Its Mr Me Return Part 17 Also you know) (before I will start You know (no offense) no offense no offense), (All what (Mr Me) wants its make you know )More) (and you know Mr Me really (wants to help you) not just to this story other stories (Mr Me wants to help) in (global scale) (you know do you want advice (in (all) (stories) you kinda try so hard to get rid from unit 01 (I mean evangelion)… (I mean) I mean (I know how you think) (I know you know that evangelion (you know robot) its crap (something like worst mecha (I mean robot) (I mean ) you know you have nothing (kinda…) (you know that no one well wants to have such robot) (just like you as the author) (see the fun thing) (yo want to get rid of it) (with any way) but at the same (but at the same time you do not want to get rid) (And you do not want (to change the very essence of evangelion as anime and as mecha (you know why you pick (gundam) (because well its a dream) (and eva as robot has only absolute hopelessness, frailty ? (its nothing in other words) (you fight with you fight the consequences but you never change the essence) because (that is what you really want to protect with any way really) (so what Mr Me) (here is the idea (turn it info) (something) like Infinity Gauntlet (from the world of mecha) (in short) (here is the idea) (Elder God Evangelion) its the brother (of Elder God Demonbane) (from demonbane) (vs battles wiki) (think of him as Infinity Gauntlet (from the world of mecha) (you I had explanation why is eva 01 is so weak in the start of the story) (if simple its not even real evangelion) (Yui collected it from the trash (to protect the multiverse with him) if simple he is like (cosmos from marvel) (if simple (read (whole Ultimates Vol 2 (of 2016) and Ultimates 2 Vol 2 (whole eternity war arc) just replace Eternity (with Evangelion) and replace First Firmament (with mine my main villain) (if simple) contact experiment (its like bomb with a detonator (only in the opposite sense, this is not an explosion but the creation of something like a shield) (something like (evangelion is 10 cosmos) (if simple) (its like return to base from transformers prime) (via space bridge) then press the detonator turn on evangelion and protect multiverse) (turn on meta eva form) the plan didn't go smoothly (energy on space bridge had enough only for 1 and not for 2) and eva was turned but was uber weak (like Eternity Bad state) in Ultimates (comics) (see Mr Me Creates your story (for you)… (and he does not has to (make characters fools) (like she walked over the gates…) (gendo is evil but I will be with him... (and one more think I want you to know) (Yui is not (in eva 01) even (in canon)….. (i want you to know more)... |
Tiber Septim26 chapter 9 . 9/23/2019 (Its Mr Me Return Part 16) (part 3) Also you know) (before I will start You know (no offense) no offense no offense), (All what (Mr Me) wants its make you know )More) (and you know Mr Me really (wants to help you) not just to this story other stories (Mr Me wants to help) in (global scale) (so lets return to the start) well (imagine) endless white space (and two flying islands) (and under them is endless ocean) (this ocean is the multiverse) (imagine them fighting) or (imagine) (Ship of of transformers ark) and nemesis (ship from transformers) (imagine space fight) so now imagine of the (you know sending auto avatar) to investigate (you know what is happens) in multiverse) (reason) well you have to create something with your brains) right ? (so) now (you know space bridge) (from transformers prime ?) so now replace all this (you being stuck via curse) going beyond gates) for simple (space bridge) simply did not have energy to teleport yui auto avatar back to the island or ship) you know in transformers( ark was kinda in bad state) (see it does not has characters to look like a fools (to move your story) (and now final well) you know contact experiment) well just very simple (Space bride did not have energy) to teleport (two) (and only yui got teeported back) (and one more think (want to know mind break (of canon (of evangelion) (Yui is (not in eva 01 (Not There) (she is here Higher Being/World of Mind – The true essence of Shinji belongs to some metaphysical layer of reality, which stands several steps above the entire material universe(Multiverse). If the latter is like a world of endless restrictions, then this is a world of endless freedoms. At this level of the universe, knowledge, concepts and ideas are by no means considered something ephemeral and irrelevant. Here information, like any other intangible substance, acquires greater weight and significance than any real objects and quantities. (and now mine fan favorites (you know about) shinji being born from two mothers (in other words he has no father) (I one has a question) (in mien stories you know.) why does 9hinji thinks that gendo is his father) if yui never meted him and she does not even knows who he is (and her wife is her sister) (and even shinji himself (does not knows who gendo is) (is he got memory warped by main the main villain) (answer is idk (think no) as I said (I always liked idea of gendo being some omnipotent evil) (that is not even human) (in our case) this shard of auto avatar of gendo (even may be human) he even thinks that he is (whole world its a dream (think of him as a nightmare inside dream) (you know who walks around dreams (since all humans (live) in their own (dreams) universes) (like in bloodborne (game) (always wanted to make gendo agent of main bad guy) and that (gendo is some evil god or something like that) (now about shinji) (he does not sees the world as we see him) (for him its something like a dream) (you know when you in dream (you kinda see movies) and he can switch) channels (when his mother was with him) (he was only tuned to her dream channel separated from everyone else) (since all others dreams) are in this nightmare dream) (so we know (shinji) (was in shocked state) (here is something he is lost the frequency of dream and fell on the total frequency and channel of dreams (in dreams when you dream you see movie (you think you part of it) (therefore life (all characters of eva are that bad) (they all in a very bad dream) (they are like in (modern Yharnam) (from bloodborne game) (that is why I think (shinji with CHIM) wins in (global) (he not just) (tutored) to become strong) (not just) (like in this story becomes saved) (because you see (how to win) in (nightmare dream) (well you need to understand that is all a dream). (if (simple (CHIM) its nirvana) (goal of all living beings) (state of (freedom from desires, suffering and affection (lack of their influence on life events);) liberation from suffering, from the circle of birth (samsara); a state of consciousness in which the elements of sanatana - the stream of consciousness (dharma) are at rest; the highest goal of the aspirations of believers in early Buddhism and in Theravada, attainable after the eradication of all obscurations (nirvana with the remnant (if more simple) (he understood that his suffering (like gendo abandoning him) etc (dream they are not real) (and all he needs to do to win) (to understand that they are not real). (and well he wins not just here he wins in past present and future) (because you see) (all this has any power over him at all) (because) (bad dreams (can have power over you) only if you think that they are real) (and whole world its a dream) (Shiji) Achived CHIM ? Yes he is.. (he is like Talos, vivec and nerevarine) read their profiles (on vs battles wiki) (and now about you) (Sure, Epyon could have had Shinji walk up to the biggest, baddest dude he could find and punch him in the mouth to get respect from everyone. But he doesn't want to earn respect that way. This way, he gets the respect of the top dog and everyone else will think twice about messing with him, although others will try, too.) you know (if you were confident in yourself (and what you write) (you would not write this) and you ? (I mean something like (why does Mr Me needs) to write something like this (if he knows) that (something like (that shinji is in the top of strongest characters of fiction) (somewhere of level of (other (favorites) (of Mr Me like (kami tenchi and Azathoth) (wait does that mean that you are trying to prove something to somebody)? (because all these people have achieved something and (you are not) (sure, Epyon could have (be like all those other people) (and even you will try to be like them) (you still want to be not like them right) ? (you know (if you want to say) that you are above (Mr Me) then say it (right to Mr Me) (in the face) (because idk (you do not write that shinji is born from two mothers and he has (no father) (then you have to have some debates with (Mr Me) no offense, only the truth (and you know if you want to prove the opposite, I'm waiting (Mr Me is from vs battles wiki (out there you know you have to prove stats prove feats) (your point of view no offense, only the truth (and you know if you want to prove the opposite, I'm waiting (Mr Me is from vs battles wiki (out there you know you have to prove stats prove feats) (your point of view |
Tiber Septim26 chapter 10 . 9/23/2019 (Its Mr Me Return Part 16) (part 2) Also you know) (before I will start You know (no offense) no offense no offense), (All what (Mr Me) wants its make you know )More) (and you know Mr Me really (wants to help you) not just to this story other stories (Mr Me wants to help) in (global scale) (Mr Me explains cosmology as (powers) ok ? (Memory change )– the one who is is able to easily delete, add and edit data accumulated in the personal dimensions of all living beings, as if they were nothing more than ordinary digital files on his computer. And since all thought processes in consciousness are based on the experience acquired in the course of life, acting on it, it will change the very essence of his personality. (since the past of the world of man exists only in his memory, the removal of data about any event from it will lead to a change in the history of his reality) (in other words (when you are changing memories) is the same as warping (reality) on universal scale) (since universes are points of view) or (or simply (we universes) (our minds) not (some places) (there is no) any material world) (we) are another universes) (yes (we) like (Mr Me and you) Crushing of the universe – The perception and memory of each individual form their separate truth, their own universe. In this regard, when only one or a few people change their memories, without affecting all existing consciousnesses, because of inconsistencies in the worlds, isolated realities with different stories are formed. (Copies) – after the separation of the universe, a person with a changed truth continues to live in the reality corresponding to it. At the same time, a copy of this person is created in the worlds of people with intact memories, following the original truth. The more consciousnesses have been changed, the more alternative versions of the same people appear. (Control of the material world) In spite of the fact that the material universe (is in fact only a projection of the observer’s consciousness,) ordinary people (who live in matrix) cannot bend the reality to their desires) (and as you can guess (on) those who (know that) (world is well dream) and (and those who are not matrix) material world(this does not works for them) (this is a very big simplification (but hope you can understand ) now (Multiversal singularity) They are gestalt beings, existing in higher (Spatial)dimensional space, each one formed from the combination of the infinite variations of a singular individual which exist throughout the multiverse. They are collective intelligence of the combined being, while at the same time retaining their individuality (they are both individual and collective beings), effectively becoming all of the composite incarnations of the being at once, allowing the them to exist across an infinite number of (universes) simultaneously. (Multiversal singularities are, broadly speaking, living quantum events—multiple infinite incarnations co-existing, until they resolve into one particular state)) It is difficult to easily express how a multiversal singularity experiences existence. Most they can be as both what might be termed inear lifeforms, who travel from universe to universe, or who co-exists across all universes simultaneously. The distinction, however, is fairly arbitrary; the term inear is very limited language, as the nature of a singularity's existence is such that they will live and re-live many events over and over in infinitesimally-different worlds, and the differences in the flow of space and time from one universe to the next can mean that they will exist in one universe while also existing simultaneously in any number of other universes at any potential point in the timeline. The end result is what we beings limited to (three Spatial dimensions) would perceive as a single consciousness linked to multiple bodies operating simultaneously, even if singularities themselves see it differently. (now) (for example) (there is Meta Shinji) (multiversal (incarnation of Shinji) (and there is (normal) shinji (normal shinji) is avatar (of meta Shinji) (in 3d universes) (its like characters in computer game) (they are both) (collective and individual) (just like we play characters) (in games) (and now (there is many avatars) (same with them) (Auto-Avatar) - infinite number of Shinji(s) from (all universes) universal continuums, universes and realities. Each of them is an independent unit. And they are also (a single entity. )The main one is, (meta Shinji) for example the true essence, the confluence of one beings from a multitude of universes controlled by meta (being). He is a being of higher Spatial dimensions, so huge that his whole body can permeate infinite parallel multiverse(s). However, this is only the appearance of (how lower Spatial beings see it. In fact,) he is is a creature existing within the framework of 11-dimensional reality (he is 11 Spatial dimensional being) (High 1 C Level) (vs battles wiki) so now (lets just say (its all about asgardians) (and how are you show (your version of asgardians) (you show them as 9 B level characters with street level stats) (where are the meta) where are auto avatars ? (why do you know nothing ?) (end of part 2) |
Tiber Septim26 chapter 11 . 9/23/2019 (Its Mr Me Return Part 16) (part 1) Also you know) (before I will start You know (no offense) no offense no offense), (All what (Mr Me) wants its make you know )More) (and you know Mr Me really (wants to help you) not just to this story other stories (Mr Me wants to help) in (global scale) you know (see I want to know why do you do not want to use your brains ?) (for example)… (you do not want to create something new and (and change something) (in global scale) (for example you explain why yui stuck on earth (with lines of level like well she was naive type and walked over the gates)… (well its makes you fool (as a writer) because you do not want to work with brains) (and you make characters fools as well) (because you do not know how to move story any other way)… (and only think you can say (to protect) yourself) (well its fantasy almost disney) what do you want ?) (well its called (cosmology) (when you explain how your world works...) well (imagine) endless white space (and two flying islands) (and under them is endless ocean) (this ocean is the multiverse) (I will (ths is this This is a plan of information, the highest stage of evolution that surpasses reality, without any restrictions, where each creature represents a walking universe, with infinite freedom) (I will try to explain this as powers of shinji ok ? Higher Being/World of Mind – The true essence of Shinji belongs to some metaphysical layer of reality, which stands several steps above the entire material universe(Multiverse). If the latter is like a world of endless restrictions, then this is a world of endless freedoms. At this level of the universe, knowledge, concepts and ideas are by no means considered something ephemeral and irrelevant. Here information, like any other intangible substance, acquires greater weight and significance than any real objects and quantities. (Personal Dimensions) – Each person existing in the universe has its own separate dimension in the highest reality. All the hidden thought processes of a living being flow directly in it, dreams and dreams are embodied, and memories of all their alternative versions are stored in the perceptions of other people. (Informational entity) – whenever you leave your image in someone else's subjective reality, you will create a new unique version of you in the world of mind. The impression you made on a person that he learned about you directly influences its essence. At the same time, these copies are fully-fledged individuals independent of the original. Shinji's immense fame provides him with a large number of such information bodies. (Transcendence) – While the indefinite and blurred in the higher being acquires its materiality, the clear and concrete loses it. Regarding him, all forms of the material, as well as the framework peculiar to him, are nothing. Consequently, for creatures living here the physical world is (an almost illusion,) and the laws that it follows are a simple data set. (Shapelessness) – In higher being, the mind does not need to be attached to any physical object with a clear form. What he looks like, what features his body will possess, and whether it will be at all depends solely on his own desire. (Infinity) – The need to move in space is a necessary measure, which has arisen due to the intolerance by the orders of the material universe of uncertainty, and the demands of the object of a particular location. Here you can, at the same time, find where you only want, and completely ignore the concept of distance as such. (Ignoring time) - as is the case with the axes of space, this also applies to time coordinates. It is completely pointless to enclose one’s consciousness in the framework of one barely weaving moment, without the opportunity to go back or go too far ahead. Being information, you can freely move both into the past and into the future. (Observer) – If no one remembers this or that event, it never happened. So far, no one has confirmed the fact of materiality of any object - it cannot be considered material. In fact, the universe itself is only real relative - an observer of who is able to decide what is false and what is true in it. ((ever heard this question) is there a universe without an observer) and is there an observer without a universe) (Subjective reality) - in view of the uniqueness of each consciousness, the same event or phenomenon can be perceived completely differently. This leads to the fact that all people exist within the framework of not just one reality, uniting all the truths in themselves, but in many disparate worlds with their own separate truth. (here Mr Me Needs to explain) (we do not live in the same world(universe) (another universes) are not places (they are another points of of view (or points of perceptions) if simple (ever heard this line) (everyone believes what) they want to believe (if simple everyone lives in their own dream world) (for example (Mr Me) is another (universe for you) and for you (Mr Me is another universe) (we do not live in the same universe) and we do not have same (point of perception (view) (same truth) (This allows you to influence the real world, because the person inside himself wants to see a certain future. Each person is essentially a point of view from which the form of the future is embodied. In other words, parallel universes.) (and one more thing (another universe) versions of beings (are not) some (another humans who live in some other place) (they are (another (Points of view (or perception) of us (from their point of view) (for example (Asuka knows shinji (she has view of him) (and this is (another) shinji inside her (universe) (another universe version of him) (whenever you leave your image in someone else's subjective reality, you will create a new unique version of you in the world of mind. )The impression you made on a person that he learned about you directly influences its essence. At the same time, these copies are fully-fledged individuals independent of the original.) I will end it here right now end of part (1) |
Tiber Septim26 chapter 12 . 9/23/2019 (Its Mr Me Return Part 15) Also you know) (before I will start You know (no offense) no offense no offense), (All what (Mr Me) wants its make you know )More) (and you know Mr Me really (wants to help you) not just to this story other stories (Mr Me wants to help) in (global scale) wanna ta know (fun story). remember Mr Me was (talking about Job bruke) from marvel (think of hi mas shinji from marvel for simple understanding) from one of all time (best comics) (strange tales) of (J.M. DeMatteis) (story of really something (of level Beyond the Wall of Sleep of (H. P. Lovecraft) and Through the Gates of the Silver Key of (H. P. Lovecraft) the fun story is (asgard and asgardians) exist on the same level of existance as (anti universe) of job burke in other words (asgardians are simply omnipotent) for them whole world its a dream its vert hard (if simpel 1-A level and outerverse level stats) for even no name asgardians)…. (from vs battles wiki) I mean I think if you really know (about asgardians you would have knowed this... and for you your (version of asgardians) its just 9-B street level characters)… with the same fun vision of live just fantasy one… (if you ask me (one of yur main problems you do not even know about what you write)... (if you want kn know ho I see them well read something like (Beyond the Wall of Sleep of (H. P. Lovecraft) and Through the Gates of the Silver Key of (H. P. Lovecraft) All haill matrix all hail wole world its a dream… (You know matrix moveis are best if you ask me |
Tiber Septim26 chapter 13 . 9/23/2019 (Its Mr Me Return Part 14) You know in your another story shinji better family) what was I want you to know I mean I think your picks for family where bad I mean… (they were bad in the original story too (but that was is another thing) but not about this right now here check out idea ( I think you know that (we do not know what is dreams really) what is happening there so (if simple its from one of mine favorite stories Beyond the Wall of Sleep of (H. P. Lovecraft) Through the Gates of the Silver Key of (H. P. Lovecraft) The Shadow over Innsmouth (H. P. Lovecraft) so kinda think if (when you sleep) you may may lead completely another life (but you don't remember her after waking up) its very hard (but here is (Are dreams more real than reality itself?) yes they are… (if honest) Mr me created story about only that where I main story story about only to (fix some holes in story) (something like why does shinji knows Kung fu) but it was kinda awesome idea what I want to say here is more complex thing (that just shinji being raised to be strong) (just best story Beyond the Wall of Sleep of (H. P. Lovecraft) (have look on vs battles wiki) someday you know) |
Tiber Septim26 chapter 14 . 9/21/2019 (Its Mr Me Return Part 13) Also you know) (before I will start You know (no offense) no offense no offense), (All what (Mr Me) wants its make you know )More) (and you know Mr Me really (wants to help you) not just to this story other stories (Mr Me wants to help) in (global scale) do you want to know good advice ? but first I want to ask a question and I want you to answer it ok ? (do you like ? the concept of absolute hopelessness, frailty ? (I think not right ? (you know one of the main problems is (you know why all those other beings (who you want to prove that you are above ?) why they all win and you not ? Well its very simple (you fight for absolute hopelessness and frailty (it has no hope if you want to) (maybe you will ask how can I fight for (absolute hopelessness and frailty) ? For example this story ? Well its simple (no matter what you do) you do not want to let go (what you really protect (the core absolute hopelessness and frailty) the core is empty you know I will say this simple (see) you fight the consequences and not the cause Mr Me once told you this ? you see the main problem (right ? (somebody has magic somebody somebody has ninja powers) and somebody (has nothing)… (if you want to say more simple (its has a core of dream) and what you have (its core of absolute absolute hopelessness and frailty) (in short Mr Me talks about Evangelion) (anime) (is well about absolute hopelessness and frailty) (there is no hope) (and such thing has (no future) and no matter what you say you protect this (no matter what) because (well first one first (Envy) you know… (they all have something) and you have nothing) (and you started to think (what makes you better than the rest) (you think they all (egoists) but you know the only real (egoist here its you) see (for example this fun line (I will explain) 'I've been working on the Eva Project, not just as means to combat the Angels so you won't have to, but to open the way the home for us. Others like Gendo and SEELE would use my work to make themselves immortal or worse, inadvertently open the way to Asario or the other nine realms.' see (the point is simple (I know gendo is absolute evil but I still will be with him) ? (and then I will try to hide it besides some (I mean its fantasy so I can say any simple thing (and it will work right fun fight ?) (something like she bellied (that Gendo has a potential) I want to ask you a question (why does for years of writing eva stories) (you didn’t do something like this) (shinji is born from two mothers if short he has no father) so why (I think you will say something) like you know (the money are not the most important think in life) (but the truth is (you you want to be a billionaire) (in other words you hide for (high ideals) but the truth is (see this two faced face ?) (of you) its looks like just like (Mr Me) (you see what I want to say is you (you need to change the core) in other words (create your own evangelion) create your own lore create your own all right from the zero (and you) you kinda have to (except) (that You (do not like Evangelion) (I mean (or more like the ideas of evangelion anime (because they say only this ( absolute hopelessness, frailty) (what I want ( is dream that is far so far away from reality) (what I want is perfection) not just something like in this story (you only try to change couple of things) but do not want to change the core still...) or simply make shinji being raised to be strong… you know (I think I said you this) Beta plot of Mr Me story was this (What if What if Shinji realized that he possess omnipotence until the end of the story until the end of the story) you see (it has a dream) not just empty core that (you want to protect) (and (you know something like that your character is omnipotent and is one of the strongest characters in fiction gives you power (you know…) (and its all canon 100) you know Mr Me has found his way to heaven so Mr Me wishes for you to find him too… all hail matrix all hail the whole worlds its dream all hail matrix all hail the whole worlds its dream no offense, only the truth (and you know if you want to prove the opposite, I'm waiting (Mr Me is from vs battles wiki (out there you know you have to prove stats prove feats) (your point of view |
Tiber Septim26 chapter 15 . 9/20/2019 (Its Mr Me Return Part 11) Also you know) (before I will start You know (no offense) no offense no offense), (All what (Mr Me) wants its make you know )More) (and you know Mr Me really (wants to help you) not just to this story other stories (Mr Me wants to help) in (global scale) (ever heart about site (Vs battles wiki) ? ( check out look on (spawn Profile there) (Attack Potency: Solar System level) so why does shinji not breaks Solar Systems in your story ? (got mine problem with you ?) but lets talk about ideas You know (Mr Me) knows its very hard (for you) (but Mr Me will try to be simple (so next (You know what I want you to know) its very hard I know so imagine) (If you are in the dream and you understand that you are in the dream (you an kinda there) right ? So now replace the dream (with real world) and now real world its a dream) (I know its very hard for you (but now mind break) (so) if you can (undertand that real wold its a dream so (you can becoem omnipotent in real world right ?) (if you will go with this ?) right got idea ? (the whole world of evangelion) its (Dream of shinji) (and its 100) all Canon) (like azathoth) check out look on Azathoth (Cthulhu Mythos) (on vs battle wiki) (and you know and the sooner you understand this the sooner you will can (create something cool and new) (and not all this) spawn stories and power rangers... (now Mr Me) wants to be (more detail) (You know all hail matrix all hail matrix (best movies ever) idk how to explain idea for you (Mr ME means) you know (for your language) (besides you know matrix movies ?) right (so I will be best explanation) or even more simple (as story story idea) something like) (shinji realized that the spoon does not exist) (Mr Me knows its hard I know but its hard to explain simply besides (you know matrix movies ?) and you know anime (Serial Experiments Lain) and all hail matrix all hail matrix (right now I want ot end this here) (I will try to expand later and you know give all your stories (cosmology) something like whole worlds its dream its matrix you know… (whole world its matrix whole world its dream) (you know as Mr Me once told you you know what was beta plot of stories of Mr Me) something like this ((What if Shinji realized that he possesses that he possesses omnipotence until the end of story) you see for Mr Me does not needs (to change reality) (you see all what Mr Me needs to (make Shinji strongest character) in (fiction) well just (bit of (canon lore) and well (canon) that is all (and its all 100 canon) and you ? (Sure, Epyon could have had Shinji walk up to the biggest, baddest dude he could find and punch him in the mouth to get respect from everyone. But he doesn't want to earn respect that way. This way, he gets the respect of the top dog and everyone else will think twice about messing with him, although others will try, too.) you know (if you were confident in yourself (and what you write) (you would not write this) and you ? (I mean something like (why does Mr Me needs) to write something like this (if he knows) that (something like (that shinji is in the top of strongest characters of fiction) (somewhere of level of (other (favorites) (of Mr Me like (kami tenchi and Azathoth) (wait does that mean that you are trying to prove something to somebody)? (because all these people have achieved something and (you are not) (sure, Epyon could have (be like all those other people) (and even you will try to be like them) (you still want to be not like them right) ? (Remember, I told you story of Mr Me 2) you know what (Mr me thinks about him) (a person who has achieved nothing in his life (has psychological protection) )she is an attack) (say something like (well money are not most important part of life) (attack all who achieved something) you see the main problem (right ? (somebody has magic somebody somebody has ninja powers) and somebody (has nothing)… (but the problem (the one who has nothing still wants to be (a billionaire) but (you know why does he writes) because deep down there you all know it... No offense for what I’ll say right now No offense for what I’ll say right now You know (the character you fight for has nothing (his world is nothing), (all his story is nothing) (its a joke) (he has nothing (in all) in (all) and the best you can do is regret and write a story (in an attempt to change reality) (and envy) you know that this is your ideology this is your ideology you know… (not ideology (of Mr Me) (and you know you are too nothing) (as a writer) I mean if you know something like idk (your is something like one of the strongest in fiction) (and its all canon you would write completely different stories (so why its not here ?) and why are stories like (idk (shinji becomes toxin…) (exist) (because (you know you are nothing) (and want to change) (and of course prove that you are (above others) (Sure, Epyon could have had Shinji walk up to the biggest, baddest dude he could find and punch him in the mouth to get respect from everyone. But he doesn't want to earn respect that way. This way, he gets the respect of the top dog and everyone else will think twice about messing with him, although others will try, too.) you know (if you were confident in yourself (and what you write) (you would not write this) no offense, only the truth (and you know if you want to prove the opposite, I'm waiting (Mr Me is from vs battles wiki (out there you know you have to prove stats prove feats) (your point of view no offense, only the truth (and you know if you want to prove the opposite, I'm waiting (Mr Me is from vs battles wiki (out there you know you have to prove stats prove feats) (your point of view (and for you did not have to prove anything (for years of being here right) (Mr Me doubts you know how to even…) so (if yo want to try Mr Me waits you know. |