I don't know... It actually makes sense. Okay, maybe the real Juvia would never actually do this cause she loves Gray too much, but I feel like this IS what would happen if Juvia were ever to think that she's had enough. I personally think that Gray DOES put her through too much emotional shit and I would love to see his face the day she decides she's gonna leave or start liking someone else, as impossible as it is. It was about time someone made a fic about this! Well done and well written! Bravo!

I find this to be a good story, but the topic is kind of cliché. It's a good story, but it could use some innovation.

Anyway, go on like this! I hope to know more from you soon :)