Whole thing is great!

Such a sweet thought and so Finn there at the end!

Hi, thought I'd reviewed this when it first came out but apparently not. Loved this, which is partly why I popped back to reread it- I usually avoid Zpoc stories, so this will be my one exception!
Another reason I popped back is that Vathara updated their Zpoc durvival kit on Wordpress and I was reminded- the list is practical things, Carol would probably have had some similar items on her wish list. You should check out Crossoverqueen's Wordpress journal, the list is good. If you haven't already.

Well considered notion

Excellent! I'll hope Finn might be one of the surviving football players, but... And how does it work, that Sue holds her insanity in check? Or is she able to do so because the need is real?

That was the sweetest end of the world story I have ever read. It's perfect.