It was repetitive, and confusing a lot of the time. It was also frustrating to read, but at the same time I did relate to Evan (the whole goody-good kid hanging with someone more outgoing). It was okay.

this story was perfect :)

WO! This was so long but so good :D I got confused a coupla times but that's probably just my demented brain _ Awesometastic story I tell ya.
LOVE IT!

...You don't understand. HOW MANY. Times. I've read. This story. And I can't believe I didn't review. **smacks self with a large trout** bad Angel. Bad. I love this story. I always have. There's to be a sequel? Hmm?

Im not really in ta angust but this... well lets just say I felt emotions that I did not know I had(same fer the first one(Elumination)) Gods I love this story. U MADE ME CRY! God I love you now. An Im exited about the next one.
~~iXx

wow.. that was good.. great

Hm, this was good. I read it when I was slightly delirious, so I don't remember much of it. But I'm determined to review it, so oh well! I liked it! I did. Is the title from that X song? Oh well, it doesn't matter... ugh, this review blows. Just know that I liked it and it was good, okay? Clear? Good. Keep it up.

i love dis story

That has got to be one of the weirdest fics I've ever read...I'm so confused! *whines* My brain hurts...

Even though I only vaguely understood it (hell, it's Saturday...I don't get anything on Saturday) I still liked it.

Umm...for your readers' sake, maybe you should have tried writing this fic in omniscent third-person (you know, when the narrator-type-person can see into everyone's mind?). Then again, maybe I'm stupid...yeah...that's probably it...

I'm going to go read the sequel now...maybe I'll understand it o.O

Wow. that was the single most amazing fic I have ever read!(And I've read alot) I loved how you wrote Evan..it seemed so real..wow...I'm in a slight shock. Never stop writing if any of your work is have as good as this, because if you do you are going to be letting the world miss out. You've got talent don't let it go to waste.

~BlackCat~

Whoo... talk about a depressing piece of work / Depresing, but AWESOME! I loved it and I wait patiently (at least I'll try to) for the sequal. Myabe the next one will have a happy ending? MAYYBE? HEhe, however it ends, I'm sure it'll be incredible. Keep writing! (What the heck happened to Denver, anyway?)

AMAZING piece. I enjoyed every minute of it that I read. :D

AMAZING piece. I enjoyed every minute of it that I read. :D

This was really long. But awesome! Poor Ev. Hopefully both he and Pietro get more action in the sequel _~

Arg! That was wonderfull! I love you! But, what the hell happened to denver? It's driving me insane! Oh well.