I know that I am 4 years and a half behind, but still; This chapter is a marvelous one-shot.
I wish there were more pairing stories based around this couple.

This was a good story so Ash and his friends including Fantina and Candice were making a Movie and it was funny how Fantina got into kissing Ash during filming and then kisses him again after viewing the film and she finds him her favourite Co star so far but what was Brock role in the film making and this is like the one chapter we’re Ash has the most kisses in this series and it was interesting that Ash Dawn and Candice played the main characters trio how were Sibling and merry Christmas and a happy new year to you and here are some ideas for future Ghost type chapters 1, Emily (Hoenn) 2, GentleGardenialovershipping (Layla movie) because of her connection to Ghertina 3, Meray because of her connection to Hoopa 4, Rhyanna who has a Misdreavus 5, Eve because of her connection to Gengar.

This was a good story and Iris would be more jealous if she know that Ash had seen other Legendary Pokemon even those that are Dragon types but Victini isn’t a Legendary it’s a Mythical but still good and while Misty did criticises Ash she was Contructive with her’s and she did help him get better while Iris didn’t really help Ash she just Criticised him like almost all the time and it was nice that Carlita wished Ash was her brother and nice that Hydreigon gave Ash a ride on it and here are some ideas for future Dark type chapters 1, Backpackshipping (Peg) because of her connection to Zorark 2, Burningtrainer/Talonflameshipping (Malva) 3, Cheekmarkshipping (That unnamed Mightyena Preformer) 4,Rebbeca (Movie 7) 5, Tamao who owned an Umbreon 6, Concetta the Preformer who has a Scraggy.

This was a good story it was nice that Pikachu and Raichu switched places to get their trainer’s gifts and it was nice that Katrina thought of the idea of her and Ash in a Romantic movie was a the right idea and I can understand Ash’s dilemma of not knowing what to get for his mom and it was nice that May and Max help him and it was funny that Max think that Ash was going the right way with a Girl he liked unlike Brock and it was nice that James and Meowth helped set up that Mistletoe for Ash and Katrina to kiss under and here are some ideas for future Electric type chapters 1, Backviewshipping (Solona) who has a Plusio 2, Ourstatueshipping (Mirror Bonnie) 3, Fulashipping (Margo) because of her connection to Zeraora 4, Cinamativeshipping (Jean) from that Pikachu movie making episode 5, Pearlshipping (Dawn) who has a Pachritsu 6, Alyssa who owns both Plusio and Minum 7, Ellie 8, Theresa 9, Crystal who has a Connection to Zapdous.

This was a good story and it was funny that Beautifly along with Mini-dit transformed as it and Max all worked to drag Brock away from Nurce Joy and it was nice that Ditto revealed to Ash that Dulprica had a Crush on him by Transforming to Meowth but I think Ash would of noun that it was not Meowth since it called him Ash instead of Twerp and it was nice that she wished to learn more about Pokemon with Ash and I guess this was when you first decided to have Ash sometimes get two kisses by the Same girl and here are some ideas for future Normal type chapters 1, Thiccshipping (Wicke) because of her connection to Stufful 2, Hungryforcontestsshipping (Lila) the pokestylist 3, Nymbshipping (Narissa) the other girl who has a Ditto 4, Brittney who has a Igglybuff 5, Paris 6, Dr Abby the poke aromatherapist who has a Delecaty 7, Alouette the Preformer who has a Furfru.

This was a good story it would only be natural that Marlene would still has some neverness from her lost to Paul and now she is the Third girls of this series to get herself hurt in a Chapter like Winona and Kidd and it was nice that Ash was willing to protect her from Seviper’s Poison sting and it was nice that Reggie wished Ash was his Brother instead of Paul and it was nice that didn’t bother them when he saw the Kiss and here are some ideas for future Fighting type chapters 1, Arenashipping (Greta) 2, Heroemergesshipping (Allegra) 3, Emily (Kanto) 4, Grace (Hoenn) 5, That Preformer who has a Scraggy 6, That Girl from the new Anime who owns a Croagunk.

This was a good story and nice that Ash was able carve Corsola Horn rings and Bracelets showing that he has some skills at something beside Pokemon battles and it was Funny how Misty showed no problem with Mika kissing Ash but when Andrea kissed him she gets upset and it was nice that Mika wanted Ash to stay with them while Andrea figured that one of them would end up marrying him and I think she was meaning herself but I think you switich the kisses around where Andrea should kissed Ash on the Lips since it would of been more impactful while Mika kissed Ash on the cheek since someone around her age would kiss someone and also its Grass type not Plant type that Leaf on the ring was supposed to represent but still good and it are some ideas for future Rock type chapters 1, Pokeshipping (Misty) since she has a Corsola 2, Footpathshipping (Sierra) 3, Heroicjewelshipping (Diancie) only if you don’t mind human and Pokemon pairings 4, Pietra who has couple rock types 5, Marissa who has a Connection to that Crystal Onix 6, Mary (Hoenn) who has a Connection to a Solrock.

This was a good story but I don’t think May would of accepted Violet’s offer because she wasn’t interested in changing any of the Gym back home and she choose to do contest ultimately later but still good and it seams Max is willing to let Ash get love from a girl since he doesn’t make a fool of himself like Brock and the moment of Violet dragging Ash down in the water for that Kiss reminded me of what Zoey in the last volume and it was interesting that she found Ash to be the cutest boy from Pallet town so she find him cuter than Gary and here are some ideas for future Water type chapters 1, Pokeshipping (Misty) 2, Pearlshipping (Dawn) 3, Muchwatershipping (Marina) from the Orange islands 4, Slastoiseshipping (Neesha) from the first movie 5, Nomadshipping (Lizabeth) because of her connection to Manaphe 6, Badtempershipping (Katie) 7, Discoveredshipping (Wilhomena) 8, Releasedshipping (Solidad) 9, Cissy one of the Orange islands gym leaders 10, Pietra 11 Trinity 12, Sumomo who has a Vaporeon 13, Olesia who has a School of Woopers.

This was a good story it was funny that Piplup was the one to stop Brock from his flirting instead of Crugunk and it was nice that Princess Salvia is willing to let continue his journey to become a Pokemon Master before she can take him as her Prince/Knight it’s was interesting that she wasn’t yet betroved to any prince when that is usual for a royal family and it was funny how Ash is worried that the Pokemon might attact him if he was to ask a girl out which they said they wouldn’t also what happened during the rest of the night did Ash go back to the guest room or did Salvia convince him to sleep with in her room and here are some ideas for future Flying type chapters 1, Hollyhockshipping (Holly) 2, AdvanceShipping ( May) since she has a Bueatifly 3, Kahili the Pokegulf champion 4, Miki 5, Ada 6, Janet 7, Backwardhatshipping (Maran) 8, Welcomedcustomshipping (Carol) both from the second movie.

This was a good story it was interesting that Aria wanted to give Ash a makeover at last it was with a Suit and not a Dress and it was nice that she and Ash tag teamed against team Rocket and Aria was right about Jessie not deserving the title Kalos Queen because she doesn’t know how to act like a royal and a good one at that and so Ash and Serena both know that Arianna is Aria and nice that Ash will keep her secret and nice one with Ash figuring out team Rocket’s disguises for once and nice that Aria supports Ash with Serena even though she was the one to kiss him and here are some ideas for future Fire type chapters 1, Childshipping (Molly Hale) because of her connection to Entia 2, AdvanceShipping (May) 3, Amourshipping (Serena) 4, MirrorAmourshipping (Mirror Serena) 5, Victoryshipping (Marley) 6, Heroemergesshipping (Allegra) 6, Julie who owns Numels 7, Natasha who owns a Slugma 8, Koume the Kamono sister who owns a Flareon.

This was a good story I was interesting that a Future sight was activated even after the Pokemon was defeated and it was nice that Girafarig showed a vision of Ash and Cherry together but the future isn’t set in stone it can be changed but still good and it was funny that Butch came out of nowhere when Ash said his his name right to talk to thin air like he was talking to Cassidy and nice one with cherry called out Misty’s feeling towards Ash and her pokemon showing Misty what was hideing to herself but a shame that even after that she still couldn’t admit it to Ash only to yell at him for no right so i guess Misty May have misted out for cherry and here are some ideas for future Psychic type chapters 1, Chimetuneshipping ( Francesca) 2, Advancetwinshipping (Liza Hoenn) 3, Hyekkaushipping (Olympia) 4, Humbleshipping (Concordia) 5, Tenderheartshipping ( Anthea) 6, Heroeatchshipping ( Kate) 7, Jourdeplusieshipping (Elise)8, Circusshipping (Stella) 9 Pavilianshipping ( Diana) because of her connection to celebs 10, Don’tbendacendshipping (Maya) 11, Tradebattleshipping ( Katharine) 12, Electricteleaportationshipping (Mira) 13, Carlista Johto.

This was a good story nice that Ash got a Interview from Alexa about this journey from Kanto to Kalos and about the Garchomp incident and it was nice that Alexa got to meet Ash’s Noibat since it has the less Development of his Kalos team and it was interesting that the Group returned to Luminous city after Ash’s seventh Gym battle when it didn’t happen in the Anime and I think that Alexa was trying to hide her crush on Ash from Viola by what she was saying and here are some ideas for future Dragon type chapters 1, Indulgenceshipping ( Brianna) 2, GentleGardenialovershipping (Layla) since she has a Connection to Gihratina 3, Altroshipping (Latias) only if you don’t mind people and Pokemon pairings 4, Emma 5, Gail from the Club battle tournament 6, that girl from the Nimbasa train station who has a Axew all three from Unova.

This was a good but I fought Valerie could only do Pokemon talk with just fairy types and it was interesting that she and her girls had Ash dressed up in her designs and it was funny how she whistled at his muscled torso and was this meant to be reward to any challenger who beat her Trick room move and it was nice that Valerie came up with the idea to make Men’s style of her designs so Ash would feel better and more comfortable to him and it was interesting how Valerie was interested in Ash wearing women’s clothes before and here are some ideas for future Fairy type chapters 1, Amourshipping (Serena) 2, Ourstatueshipping ( Mirror Bonnie) 3, Givenpokegearshipping (Lisa) 4, Circusshipping ( Stella) 5, Mina the last trail captain 6, Cehra the Pokejump sludge champion 7, Brittney who has a igelypuff 8, Heroicjewelshipping (Diancie) only if you don’t mind Pokemon and human pairings 9 Princess Kimia who has a shiny Gardenoir.

Genial hh

Cool fanfics. Good job.