So Cute. I hope you write more fluff when the new Smash game comes out.

1000/10

I personally love how you make the characters. Yes pit does seem a bit naive, but that makes it humorous believe it or not.
I LOVE TSUNDERE PERSONALITIES. You get to be creative with their feelings.
I love all of your works with Kid Icarus. It's sad to say that I've read every single one of the Pit x Dark Pit fics on this sight, and so far you are my absolute favorite.
I look forward to reading more of your works. :D

*THE SPAM IS ON!*

Dawww, poor tree

I would appreciate a reader x dark pit x pit from an author like you. The reader being a boy or another angel. But it's your choice, if you do it, then you know what? Thanks.

always have passion and don't let criticisms make you think too much or get the better of you :D you're stories are fun to read because you love writing them. well not all the time, but I still like reading all of them anyways xD

I like your Pitcest stories. But I hope you don't mind if I point out something about your characterization. Like Dark Pit is extremely tsundere, but to the point it borders on extreme oocness. And I noticed with Pit that he is very, VERY cheerful in your fanfics, and I can see you're trying to capture his innocence, but you should avoid from making him ignorant. People can be optimists and smart at the same time. And while Pit doesn't understand large words, him getting confused what the word "desire" or a synonym for want just comes across as ignorance, not naïveté.
(and btw, why does Pit puke so much in your fanfics? ; Not meant to be rude question, I'm legitimately curious)).

So yeah, maybe replay kid icarus or watch cutscenes? Because I have an idea on how you want people to view their relationship in your fics, but you often overdo it with Dark Pit's aggression and Pit's ignorance (confusing it with optimism). I say this because keeping Dark Pit as an asshole to Pit with or without meaning to still qualifies as an abusive relationship. Maybe get a beta to go over your work if you want to take writing to the next level?

I'm sorry if this sounded harsh, but I'm not flaming you. I am however offering criticism which you may or may not consider before you write another Pitcest fanfic.

OH MY GODDESS! FKASNFJSJGJSJ
I LOVED IT
FIRST I WANTED TO PUNCH MAGNUS'S FACE
BUT THEN I WANTED TO HUG HIM HAHAHAHAH IT MAKES ME LAUGH... A lot...
Anyways I loved the history it was great uvu

I usually like pairing where they are completely opposites. but Pit and Pittoo is just awesome :D and the way they are together is so cute. even if Pittoo is so angsty and like an emo boy xD sometimes he is also sort of mature? like in your other stories :P

OMG I love this story! Thanks so much for uploading this, I love you!