Brilliant story so far! I really hope you choose to continue this and update soon!

Please update soon

Hey I was just rereading this fic, I really hope you post for it again. It’s so good, I especially can’t wait for Jerome first episode appearance in this.

I love this story a lot, each chapter is well put together and written good to. I’m really excited to see what happens in the future chapters as it progresses through seasons 2, 3, 4, and eventually 5 after the show ends. Another thing that I am looking forward to is how Winifred changes throughout the course of the story and how her interaction with each character such as her uncle Jim along with her friends Bruce and Selina to. Other than that I can’t wait until the next chapter gets posted and I’m excited to see what happens later on.

I'm so excited for Jeremiah to meet Winifred! Especially when he's going to embrace his insane (or 'very sane' as he likes to call it) self. After Jeremiah found Jerome's diary I was intrigued by the fact that Jeremiah was set on doing what his brother could have done but still outshine him by doing something even better. Winifred is clearly an important person to Jerome and I feel like Jeremiah could see a potential in her. In the flashbacks you created I've noticed that whenever Jerome kidnapped Winifred (I'm talking especially about the one where Bruce was kidnapped also) he made sure that she would be in the audience, but she wouldn't take part in anything dangerous. Jerome loved having minions but Winifred seemed off limits to him. I'd like to think that deep down, she was his light and he didn't want to corrupt her into something darker than what she is. The only way to upstage Jerome is for Jeremiah to make Winifred a partner in crime or a right-hand woman. For all I know maybe he will question Echo's loyalty to him or get tired of her. So by killing her, Winifred would be a good candidate to take her spot (well in Jeremiah's eyes at least) Having Jerome's 'one true love' by his side would be like spitting on Jerome's grave and we know how much Jeremiah despises his brother now.

Since you are halfway through the season one story I am curious to see how it will go for Winifred when you get to the season finale chapter. I hope she doesn't get caught in the middle of the stuff that happens in the season finale where her uncle Jim gets captured at one point by Fish Mooney and there's also the part where Barbara tries to attack Lee. But either way I really look forward to reading your future chapters.

I was so in the story, so invested and then suddenly no more chapters I love the story and your writing style and hope you continue soon

I have read all the chapters so far and I gotta say that this is a really good fan fiction. I love the character Winifred a lot and one of the best things that I like about this story is how well written you have her interacting and meeting many of the other characters in the show Gotham. Another great thing I enjoy about this fan fiction is the relationship between Winifred and her uncle, because the way you identify the compassion and love Jim Gordon has for his niece is well played out in each chapter and he does the best he to protect her since Jim is only other family member she has aside from her mother. I am excited to see how Winifred's character development will change throughout the next few chapters especially since she'll be part of the other storylines in the future seasons of the show. I also look forward to see how Winifred will interact with some of the other Gotham characters such as Dr. Leslie Thompkins, Fish Mooney, Hugo Strange, Theo Galavan, Silver st. Cloud, and many others as well. Keep up the good work Winchestergirl123 you're doing awesome.

I’ve just reread this whole fic after that last episode of Gotham. I am so excited to see where you take this story after what’s been happening on Gotham. I can’t wait for the next chapter, I just love how you write all of the characters and I’m especially curious to see how Winifred grows throughout the seasons.

Can you do a chapter on Jerome's death and meeting Jeremiah Valeska? Cause that would be great 3

I'm curious about how Winifred will react to seeing Jeremiah, that's if she will ever meet him. I notice in 4x17, Jerome states how Jeremiah turned everyone he loved against him, I can picture him bragging about his relationship with Winifred to Jeremiah. Also with how 4x18 ended, it makes me wonder if Jeremiah might become interested in Winifred.

I'm kind of curious, how would Winifred react to Jeremiah? One thing I caught while watching 4x17 is Jerome stating how Jeremiah turned everyone he loved against him.

I was watching last weeks episode of Gotham and then saw this fic. This is such a good fic, I'm very picky when it comes to OCs but I genuinely like Winifred and that last chapter OMG! Glad she hates Tetch, he's super creepy. Can't wait to read more, seriously sooo cool, you're writing is amazing

Incredible chapter, I really like the flashforward. Also I'm so happy there's another chapter with the scarecrow, it's so good. I also love how you've adapted her for the time and events that have already passed in Gotham. I really can't wait till she meets up with Jerome again such a good chapter

Absolutely amazing update! I love her relationship with Jonathan and seeing what’s going to happen in the future of this fic. Love this chapter! So awesome!