This was a lot of fun! I've always wondered how people didn't make fun of Naruto for his name, given that it's the same as fish cakes, but, oh well, everyone's got similar names and Naruto was pulling other shiz and I'm not going to ramble on now.
Well, this was a fun premise and an even better execution! Thanks for the story!
R. K. Iris.

Hahahahh

This is bad for my lungs, lmao... Pure awesomeness...

~Snappy~

Having read both versions of this story - ALSO hilarious!

... you have won me with this fic. It's great.

I have to say, I think Duesals is funnier, since it expands so far into the plot, but your is a bit more well crafted.

this is rather amusing, i wonder how it would affect naruto's character?

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This was funny as fuck, I was dying half the time. Glad that I found your page the other day.

Oh crap that was hilarious.

damn funny. liked both this one and Duesals.

best story ever

Okay so I'v read both of your stories and both are really funny and I laughed so hard at both of them. You guys have both done a good job and I am even going to follow both of you guys for more great content.
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I really enjoyed this one. Both were out right hilarious in there own right. I liked the ending of this one and this one has way more potential to have more chapters added to it. I also liked that it is longer then it's sister story.
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I can't say which one was really better, so for me at least it's really a tie between the two stories.
Both were great.
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Well I'll read ya both later
-BFBL

I like how you write the character interactions, and your dialogues flow smoothly.

Great story so far