Carlisle thinks Edward is a fool? what tipped him off? he's been moping around for years and they have just been letting it go. if he was really Bella's mate he would never have done what he did to her in the first place.

Edward always thinks he's so smart. that boy has no sense at all !

way to go Bella! i don't understand why that crackpot Aro thinks he will be able to control her. and why on earth was Aro's wife the first one to talk to Bella?

edward is delusional if he thinks bella is still his girl friend. he's such a child!

aro is ever the optimist.

I love all of your stories I am going though your profile and reading them all apprentky ones I have read before as well. I love this story but there is a slight continuity issue and I went back to make sure I hadn't misread. in chapter 16 Sulpicia knew Ago killed Didyme and only stayed quite for fear of her own fate, however when it came to Aro's trial it appears she had no knowledge of his deeds. Now while if it were me I would have appeared shocked as well if it again were to save my own neck and not follow the fate of my bastard husband but as a writer I may have made mention of that fact. But all and all great story and I hope for more from you. Thanks for sharing and happy writing.

Damn,that boy is one hell of a drama doesn't he just build a pyre light it and walk into it and save the world from his pity party?

she needs to realize that she owes him nothing the way he has treated her he should have felt lucky she would even talk to him

great story! loved the "rental payment" at the end!

Good luck with that Bella. Not going to work.

Great story. I really loved how it ended

This was a hard chapter to go through. It was good don't get me wrong, but as a parent that has lost a child, it was a tough read. I always enjoy your stories, and so far this one hasn't disappointed me yet!

Fantastic story! Thank you for sharing.

He is so Carlisle has finally seen what a real human family is children do not stay forever they leave and build their own lives then come visit then leave once again.

Maybe if you would actually grow up this wouldn't happen dumped her like so much trash then your asshole of a ''sister'' forces her to come rescue your lame ass and expose her to your rulers and still expect her to fall all over . guess you will become her stalker convincing yourself she is just confused and didn't mean what she said to on top you you stalking her she will have Jacob doing the same thinking he has a chance of getting into her pants.