| Reviews for Lack of Air |
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Biancamanda16 chapter 1 . 12/22/2019 Vaya cuando Stan hablo de Bill y luego iba a sacar algo de su bolsillo pense que sacaria la grieta y empezaria el raroarmagedon porque pense que habia perdido la razon . No me esperaba que fuera un arma . Por un momento pense que Stan habia muerto eso fue desgarrador . Y si tambien creo que Ford se mercia esa golpiza . Gran fic ;) |
ZodiacSnake chapter 1 . 6/23/2016 This is absolutely amazing everything I could ever want and a stan twins fic! The way Ford kept saying that Stan ruined his life has always bothered me because really all he did was make it a little harder Ford still got everything he wanted Stan's who lost everything who was barely given a choice in the life he lived and whose life was awful as a result. I absolutely believe everything that stan listed here happening to him during those 10 years is canon. I also love the way this ended, that stan did pull the trigger and by nothing short of a miracle survived and that ford realized how much he needed to fix things and how much he loves Stan but also that Stan couldn't be fixed just hearing those words because that's so true hearing one person say they love you isn't going to fix a whole life of being told you're worthless. but that they're both willing to try and put the work in to heal and fix their relationship I love it I love it I love it. Thank you so much for the work you put into writing this and for sharing it with us. |
Dead Hero chapter 1 . 12/29/2015 " What has he done? What did he do to his broken little brother? Why was he such an idiot!? " THAT'S when my heart broke. God this is such an agonising piece that just digs into your mind and makes feel for the characters. The deprecating way Stan talks about himself is distressing and Ford slowly and then suddenly realising it's all HI is just... This piece is just genius and thank you for writing it. Oh and please write a second chapter really just anything that is somewhat of a continuation. |
Alysia Of The Pen chapter 1 . 10/22/2015 Thanks so much for that catharsis! Guilty Stanford is a favorite of mine. I really like that you took Stanley right to the brink with the suicide attempt - I really thought you'd kill him for a couple minutes there, I did not expect him to survive! You continue to excel at writing in Stanley's voice. In comparison, Stanford's dialogue is weaker, but I'd mostly chalk that up to our relative unfamiliarity with him (he's only been in seven episodes, and only talked in six of them). |
Extreme Light 9 chapter 1 . 10/21/2015 So sad and touching. T-T |
InsanityIsClarity chapter 1 . 10/20/2015 This has some deep issues... But you handled them with respect and wrote them well... A! |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/20/2015 Your weitting was spot on! Good job |
Candymouse22 chapter 1 . 10/20/2015 Ahhhh the feels are strong with you! I really liked this but I just wish it didn't take Stan trying to kill himself for Ford to get his head out of his ass! YOUR BRO LOVES YOU STOP BEING SUCH A D***! If you can't tell, I agree that Stanford deserved to get punched in the face. I can't wait for your next gf story! |
Lunammoon chapter 1 . 10/20/2015 Please let this NOT be a one shot. I NEED MOOR. But seriously, this is awesome. |