Drastic intimidation tactic... okay, it's working. I also have a very, very bad feeling about those hanging figures. A "they're not just Night constructs but the crew's dream selves"-kind of feeling. And that the Night/Dreamweaver will make them fight Link, maybe?
And since we've had Eleos this time, I guess Phobos is next? Oh boy. Can't wait to see how you'll work that in. :)

Getting the feeling Janni's deflecting again...

Well, Link is getting pretty beaten up. It really feels like we're coming up on the finale, but I don't wanna get overly eager, cause you're just sometimes unpredictable Light. That's also the same reason why I'm still puzzling over Janni's connection to the Dreamweaver... I want to say family in some way, but lover/wife seems too straight forward, so maybe daughter? But as I said, I'm not sure and that just makes me look forward to the rest of it more!
Also that jaw monster? I mean, most movie classics are getting revamped, so why not Jaws! ;D (Stupid joke, I know. I'll show myself out...)

4th wall punch? Are you doing that to slow that they are all slowly losing their minds or to inject some humor into this story of darkness?

Must have missed Link getting it, but from the context clues, it seems he now has a Hookshot. That's some useful gear right there.

Does the chapter title continue with "... open wide, before swinging right back in your face"? Because, while I'm glad that it's going well for the crew for once, I feel like it's going waaaay too well.
The rigor mortis while alive was a nice, unexpected touch. My brain is still trying to figure out how and if that were possible...
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Hey, I haven’t commented in a while but I just want to say that this fic (and its prequel) are some of the best works I’ve ever read and I wait for each update with baited breath. I love this fic so much!

I've seen a lot of Gerudo and Sorian around, mind sharing your docs on it?

...low growling hmmm sound
Interesting... So he finally figured out that he can influence the dream by forcing things.

Glad to see an update! And interesting that Dark Link could act as a 3rd party interloper in the dream.

Rabbit?

Ah...giant rats. No adventure is truly complete without at least one. Unless it's a Zelda adventure. Those are still good without giant rats. Usually, it is because they swap out the giant rat for a giant spider. And giant spiders are also essential to adventures.

No image of Cunimincus? Damn, would've wondered what Janni thought of that.

Also can I say, I've found myself shipping Link/Janni

WHAT!?
WHAAAAT!?
NO. NOOOOO!
You didn't!
...you did.
That's crazy! But...why? Why did the Dreamweaver become the Night?
What possible reason is there to do such a thing? And better yet...who is Janni? Is she the Dreamweaver's daughter?

Well, THAT's a twist.