Reviews for Feeding the Fire
The Wicked Queen chapter 1 . 7/24
I am MADLY IN LOVE with this story.

I can't tell you how many times I've read it. Henry and Violet's first date with heavy SwanQueen feels...

It's written wonderfully. Henry's character is spot on. And... VIOLET AND HENRY! Their flirting was so cute and realistic and teenager-y. They work so well together, the way they talk and interact, and Violet's flirtatious eyebrow raise... (happy sigh)

I loved Henry's thoughts about his mother's partners, him reflecting on how his family is dealing with things, then Henry remembering Emma's talk on the birds and the bees (I laughed at Emma's wording- realistic, I could actually see her expression and hear her voice when I read the italicised words), him wondering what Regina saw in Robin as he recalled the whole 'woo her) thing then brushing it off on the soulmates thing (as much as I love OutlawQueen I have to admit they have no actual chemistry and I think as much as people loved the couple, they loved the idea of Regina being happy more than they did Robin's actual character).

Henry was great, the internal monologue and his dialogue with Violet and his mothers. Like I said, his character is spot on and wonderfully written.

I love that Violet misinterpreted the relationship between Regina and Emma and that Henry accidentally went with it at first. Because to any other person it would look like they are or were a couple and honestly the two of them work better than their canon romances - not to mention that would be an amazing story book ending.

Then the next scene with Regina and Emma... Regina's mama bear instinct going on overdrive, the "or worse she could be kissing it better" moment that I laughed out loud for (yet again!) Emma being level-headed and trying to calm her down. OMG! The whole finding leaves thing... MY HEART... I fangirled so hard at, "This one matches your dress," and, "And this one matches your eyes."

It was perfect and adorable and then how they just slipped into bickering mode... (happy sigh) And how Regina pinched the bride of her nose with the whole jakaranda tree thing.

I don't know if I've mentioned this before but I LOVE THIS STORY!

The characters are written so realistically and perfectly. I could actually hear every word and see every action. I wish this scene actually happened. I wish it actually happened. I wish it actually happened.

This was perfect. Thank you for writing it. Thank you so much. Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!
E.Elliot chapter 1 . 10/4/2019
Man I love it!*-*
Imagine Exorcist chapter 1 . 8/21/2018
Heh, such a adorkable pair Emma and Regina make sometimes.

I mean really, lying about leaf collecting once they got caught to accidentally admitting on spying on their son's - supposedly? - first date. Hilariously brilliant XD
connyx chapter 1 . 5/21/2018
And as usual, perfect :)
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2016
What if in storybrooke ( is that two words or one?) ruby (and/or belle) is helping violet pick out modern day clothes. Regina and Emma spy on her and judge her style, and then realize it exactly what they would wear?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/19/2016
I love it! Make more!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15/2016
I love it! Make more!
amazing chapter 1 . 1/8/2016
My favorite part was about the "collections" needing the right kind of "leaves"
rondaday1 chapter 1 . 11/21/2015
Excellent story would love to read more
Mmisery chapter 1 . 11/10/2015
This was so cute great work!
thoughtsmussingsandwishes chapter 1 . 11/7/2015
Cute! This makes me really wish a scene like this was in the show!
SKRowling chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
super cute!
Moma bear Emma Swan chapter 1 . 10/30/2015
LOL! so cute! loved it the conversation between the budding couple. She seems to think they ARE a couple. Them spying on them is so Emma and Regina, and so over protective mom! Love their bickering ,so first 2 seasons. I'd love Henry to tell Violet more about his past. Wonder if they intend to keep the character? This first love/crush is SO cute!
Gelphie44 chapter 1 . 10/27/2015
Aww that's a cute story. I have missed that aspect too from the new season.
BlueTigress chapter 1 . 10/27/2015
Love it! Them in bear mode collecting leaves! Lmao so funny! Love it!
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