You know something I don't really care for in regards to the original series? It goes against what I know with the TCG. The rules state to summon a monster with a level of 5 or 6 you must tribute 1 monster on the field, to summon a level 7 or 8 monster you must tribute 2 monsters on the field, and obviously for monsters with 9 or more levels you need to sacrifice 3 monsters(unless if I'm mistaken as it has been a long while since I read the rules), unless of course if you have a card that counter acts those requirements like discarding one of the monsters then using monster reborn(which is banned in official Yugioh duels) to summon it from the GY to the battlefield.

Nah nah give Naruto Mai however make it that she's thirsty for him for a while till he has 2 others girls so she will be third

if you're still deciding pairings for Naruto I ask to think about either an older Rebecca, Female Marik, or possibly Mana and Kisara

I'm glad Yugi doesn't lose Exodia but that means Weevil will go after Blue eyes so I hope Naruto will be fast enough to grab Weevil or suspicious enough of Weevil so he doesn't get rid of Blue eyes but I also hope they trounce Weevil badly.

This is one of the best stories to catch my attention with the way it’s set up that Naruto is like a batman without the costume and a ghost rider without the power of hellfire but just as fascinating that two incidents have drove him along a dark path to both protect those who mean the world to him and to keep his little brother on the path of light and I can’t wait to see the duel to end all duelist kingdom duels the battle between Naruto Muto and Maximillion Pegasus and like in the original reality because I like to think of fan-fictions as alternate reality’s where things are similar to the original but either a little bit or majorly different like this one where Naruto is yugis brother and this is one of the best versions I’ve come across especially with Naruto being ruthless to others who cross his path with ill intent and I can’t wait to see what the future holds like if he’ll be with Joey when the rare hunters come for Joey’s red-eyes and back to the original topic like what is the name of the spirit of rage because that’s the fascinating part alternate world different details like in the Naruto show the Kyuubi was named Kurama so is it the same but with some differences or something else because I’m really curious to see where this story goes with Naruto in the picture. I’d say you are a genius and absolutely fantastic because also in the story Naruto and Yugi are similar in certain aspects and different in other ways and in the next chapter I’m thinking it will be similar to how it went when yugi dueled Pegasus but it’s so exciting for how different things will go like if Naruto will do something for the kiba brothers because him and seto kiba aren’t really on good terms and I’m even curious to see how different things will be with the next arcs and may kami have mercy on Vivian Wong because she makes the one mistake to end up on Narutos list but that’s along way away and sorry for all the confusion I’m just so amazed with this story it’s just so fantastic the way Naruto uses what he gains from the path of darkness so he can protect those close to him like before when his and yugis parents died I’d wager he vowed to keep yugi and grandpa safe the way this story is set is just fascinating and future enemies better pray for mercy if they hurt his family because when he finds them then they’ll see just how merciless he can be. In the next chapter I’m thinking that yugi and his friends will combine both the bonds of brotherhood and friendship to help Naruto defeat Pegasus Because that’s one of the new twists and I hope that yugi and the pharaoh can help him calm the spirit of rage that Naruto possesses and I think part of me worries that if Pegasus pushes him too far in the duel that the spirit will break free and it makes you wonder how it will react because there’s still so much that is still unknown and that’s the fun part when secrets are revealed so I can’t wait for the next chapter so good luck and you rule!

This story is amazingly awesome with Naruto as Yugis brother and the possible result of two brothers and the outcome of Naruto being a survivor of two incidents in his life the death of his and yugis parents and the betrayal delt to him by his Ex Mai which awakens something in him and I can’t wait to see what comes next because with this kind of thing I think of it as an alternate reality because you add something that wasn’t originally there and what comes next is unpredictable and that’s the fun and exciting part all the new add-ons that come with it and I’m curious about after duelist kingdom because so many alternate events. Moving on to other things it also interests me how since Naruto being older has chosen to not let anyone important to him be taken from him again after what happened to his parents and him and Yugi are on different paths and Naruto chooses the path of darkness that is different from the usual one of evil but to protect others by being semi merciless and ruthless to those who hurt anyone in their way like a batman without the costume and is willing to go over the line that batman dared not cross because he claimed he wouldn’t stop but Naruto will if it comes to it to protect the people keeping him sane as he said and I’m curious about the spirit of rage that Naruto possesses like what is different because I’ve read lots of fanfics with the nine tailed fox named kurama and different names I wonder what it will be called this time and I really like how the reason Naruto takes the path he’s on is to keep his brother Yugi on the path of light it’s like one of the things people can expect from two brothers in which they are almost the exact opposite of each other. Also it’s awesome that you gave Joey his battle city deck because with those he has an edge but it might be wise for Naruto to teach Joey to not get cocky and warn him of how the world of dueling tournaments work because it’s a shame that he learned it the hard way in the show because when he lost in battle city it stripped him of his glory as the runner up of duelist kingdom and knocked him down to Rex Raptor and Weevil Underwoods level and I think it’s sad no one warned him about the repercussions that come from losing in tournaments and also the moves used in duelist kingdom of trap cards that are monsters in the TCG and OCG is because duel monsters was in the beginning stages and in battle city remnants of the playing format appeared in some episodes of the battle city arc like and the yugioh fandom said in yugis duel against the rare hunter who cheated with invisible ink and used exodia to win and did what we in this world are not allowed to do which is have three copies of each exodia pieces in a deck but also the show started in 2000 in the 20th century apparently and as time moves on rules of how things work change to better fit no matter how unfair and hard it is and sorry for preaching if that’s what I did and with Joey if in duelist kingdom he was able to bust out Gearfried the sword master and he gained the field power bonus he would be unstoppable because it’s attack would be 3380 and that would be strong and not even rex would be able to get any foothold in their duel even with his red-eyes and I would have liked it if Naruto crossed paths with Panik the eliminator because if Panik crossed him I think even praying for mercy would be in vain because with Naruto I think he would say "Mercy is Gods job and mine is to be Merciless and you are pathetic and undeserving of Mercy" or "sorry I ran out of Mercy a long time ago" a different version of the ghost riders "sorry all out of Mercy" and that’s another thing this Naruto is like a ghost rider with out the power of hell fire but an equally as powerful drive that keeps him going. You are a genius to create a story such as this and all that lies ahead I believe will be Fantastic so keep it up because you are awesome (and also I have a theory about why Joey seemed off in The ESP Duelist where he mistook esp for being psycho and made the mistake that cost him his giltea the D. Knight and it is that he deprived himself of sleep the night before the tournament began trying to think of a way to win back his red-eyes black dragon because of the empty bottles that could have been soda because sure soda can help keep you up but if you don’t get the proper eight hours of sleep then your mind can’t get the needed rest from it’s taxing work and it’s like over working it and doing so makes it so he was acting like an even bigger idiot than he is he is a bit clueless but has his moments of being smart but the facts in that episode just didn’t make sense because in first duel he knew perfectly well what ESP stood for and rather than "no way I’ve seen this trick before" it would’ve made more sense to say "no way I’ve delt with a phony psychic before(referring to Mai)" and in the episode where he lost his red-eyes he knew about the new sacrifice rule but maybe not every inch of the rule because he used the part of two sacrifices in the episode rather than the part that requires 1 sacrifice to summon level 5 or 6 monsters so this just adds onto the evidence that he stayed up all night the and didn’t get any rest and was to focused on getting his red-eyes to think about what humiliating consequences his actions would have because I think he should’ve played it safe and reread the rule book rather than be all who needs a rule book I know what to do but at least he won the duel but what do you think about my theory?) and I can’t wait for the duel to end all duelist kingdom duels before the reign of battle city rules come to fruition and the war begins and like in beast wars with dinobots last stand and death "I am a warrior let the battle be joined" his noble words before going against all the predacons to save the future of the human race with nothing but skill and determination to save the lives of others even at the loss of his own life that is what I see makes a person true the determination to keep going even when the odds are against you and I see that in Naruto even though the dark path and things he has done make him doubt some of his abilities that he believes were lost with the death of his parents and the betrayal of her Ex that drove him to become hardened, merciless, and I think of him as like in some way a rouge agent of god the kind of agent that is maybe like a fallen angel but he doesn’t fall to evil doing but uses his new outlook like god’s past methods of purging the world of evil with the flood that with the rainbow will never happen again and other things that became of wicked people in the beginning and Naruto is on his way to regaining some of his light because no one can ever truly become all dark because he is not like Kiba who at first was like him but along the path of dark he chose to believe in power but that can be expected because unlike Naruto and Yugi, Kiba and Mokuba didn’t have any other blood relatives to keep them on the path between dark and light because most people believe there are only two paths, two sides good and evil but if they open their eyes there’s a third path because of all the different methods used by each side some don’t seem to be right people can even choose their own side rather than someone else’s side so I hope Naruto is able to find the third path in between the path of light and darkness Because the way you have him his motive for the path of darkness are to ensure the safety of his loved ones which can be respected and I hope when the duel of Naruto Muto vs Maximillion Pegasus will have possible assurance by his brother and his brothers friends merging both the bonds between brothers and the bond of friendship and Naruto meets the spirit within him and maybe the spirit Yami who lives within the millennium Puzzle can help find some kindness in the spirit of rage because I believe it is possible because in yugioh people make the impossible possible so I wish you luck for the future of you and your stories especially this one because this one has caught my attention and I love it when a story catches my attention because if you need any ideas I will be happy to do my best because I like to give ideas to others so maybe it can add to the story some more of a special thing to maybe give the story flare and I in no way whatsoever want to take control of your story I just hope it continues because it just feels like it will be something with every compliment word all rolled into one and I salute you good luck;) you rule!

plz make more

Update soon please

Please continue this story.

I think you should dark magician girl and Kara aka the blue eyes dragon because she show that she does care about and able to calm him down when he’s angry. She should be able to change into a human form too.

Can't wait for the next update

Cool chapter continue please.

love this story can't wait for naruto to take Pegasus down also are you going to have Shadi meet naruto to tell him that the Millennium I actually belongs to him

...Yeah no, definitely should not forgiven her she is literally the reason he lost his eye and from the sound of it she was a pretty horrible person back then to do that to Naruto only to fucking grow a heart.
She should have realized her 'real' boyfriend would of done somthing like that, so despite how 'guilty' she feels about the whole situation she has far from earned any forgiveness, remember her actions got a younger Yugi beat up and cost Naruto his eye so there is no way in hell she should get off that easy, especially with how you have depicted Naruto in this fic.

Other then that it was a pretty good chapter, hope you update soon.

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