Good idea, but can't tolerate the way you have written it, sorry.
The format, grammar and spelling is just too painful to read.

Epic

Lov.

You know your so wrong Replicators would of built the drone factory etc in a week or 2 Maximum. You seriously underestimated their building capability

Pls update

very good story i've enjoyed it.

Your selling is horrible and your grammar is even worse.
This is to me just plain unreadable.
Rewrite mate, rewrite.

very good new chapter, took time but its back , they are advancing quite well, amazing warships ,and now a Galactic government , woolsey the 1st chancelor , And much more warships to build form fleets to protect and destroy the damned wraith , They should also start to colonize other planets with no Stargate , Build stargates , to install on each planet, the coordinates only known to Atlantis , and Earth should have full disclosure of the stargate , using the Arch of truth to facilitate and acept, and start colonizing nearby solar systems .Cant hardly wait for the next chapters .

I haven't read any of it yet and I'll already leary. You spelled Atlantis wrong in the title.

Good ideas again here, however how will a Atlantis built construction Replicator build Drones and ZPM's, the Atlantis teams have not begun their production as the designs, schematics and necessary production techniques have not been located within the Ancient Database.

Are you telling me that a replicator will just be given a drone and told to replicate it?

I like the fact you names a ship after Colonel Sumner.

Okay I think you have a good idea in having the Atlantis teams steal the Aurora class ships that were above Asuras, but I found actually following what was written here very very dificult and I pretty much ended up skimming the chapter and getting the gist and not really following a story, just a brief summary of what you were trying to say.

You have said that the Aurora hyperdrive, as it is limited to interstellar travels, is far slower than the Daedalus, however this is very wrong, they are among the fastest in the known universe, they can cross great interstellar distances at speeds that match that of the Asgard. They just cant make a jump across galaxies, an aurora will be faster than a Daedalus class ship even at sublight speed.

Um, given that the Wraith are connected telepathically & can read minds, how are the human spies passing themselves off as Wraith? Recall that Telya was able to impersonate Todd's queen because she could tap into the Wraith's psychic network thanks to her Wraith DNA, something regular humans lack.

I really don't get one thing: in your story you send X amount of Human Form Replicator Workers to an uninhabited world and few weeks later they have built a brand new shipyard/weapons factory/base/training center/whathaveyou there.

But... how?

Being robots the workers might not need breaks or sleep but they would still need construction equipment & raw materials for their construction. You make no mention of the robots getting either.

For example, let's say the base needs steel beams in its construction.

To make steel beams you need do dig up coal, obtain lime, dig up iron ore, create a coke oven for the coal, build a furnace to combine the lime, iron & coal coke into molten steel, create casting apparatus, etc, etc, etc. And I am likely missing a bunch of steps too since steel production isn't my area of expertise.

So where are the robot workers getting the resources, or the equipment to get said resources or even the tools to make the equipment needed to turn the resources into finished product? How are they building fully-functioning modern bases in a matter of weeks starting with 0 infrastructure?

very good new chapter , the cloning facilities are destroyed and so are the ZPM, now its time to build more warships , like Heavy cruisers , Heavy destroyers , Dreadnoughts And those massive satellites to be deployed on all the system protected by Atlantis . Cant hardly wait for the next chapters .

another great chapter, i hope that the intelligent agents steal the ZPMs from the wraith , and destroy all information . Cant hardly wait for the next chapters .