Just read it on AO3. awesome and thank you for letting me know. I don't see your Lost Girl stories on AO3.

Das you didn't continue

Like the twist in the story! Update soon!

Cool story!

awesome. pleeeeeeeeeeease update soon

This is fantastic! I love seeing Four and Five interact! Please update soon!

Things are getting interesting! The alpha/beta/omega dynamic is an interesting characteristic that I have seen played out in a lot of fanfics, and has an interesting effect on the characters of a particular story. I hope to see this story continued, it'll be interesting to see how the different characters settle into the roles of alpha/beta/omega. PS. it seems Five will be an alpha, since others are willing to protect her? Perhaps Two will be a beta, or will the nanites affect her reaction differently? Also interested in seeing the Android's reaction to the planet, as (season 2 spoiler ahead) the show has mentioned how her programming was altered to react to emotions differently than other androids.

Ermegerd. I was unsure when I started but now I'm hooked. Please keep going!

OMG I'm kinda loving all of this. Moar?

I agree that Four was the perfect choice to find Five in this condition and to animal-whisper her out of the shower. Well-written.

I think you have a great handle on the various characters. I'm really hearing their voices in your dialogue.

You might need to mention in you A/N at the top that this is the continuation for those who skipped the noncon chap (or make separate chaps). I found it confusing at the top and thought there was a version upload issue.

Still enjoying your writing style very much.

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That is all.

I don't think I like where this is going, but it's very compelling :/

really like the story line i really want to see three and five talk

for my personal I feel like two is just like her mother i would love to see that play out