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jaune hugging his mom is how he has 7 sisters.

I would fucking LOVE a fanfic of Take 29.1

So many antics

that was great

Really fucking stupid

I have to admit, this is surprisingly more clever than I had expected.

When I saw that Cloud and Tifa was going to be in the story, I was a bit skeptical. Most fics who squeeze cool characters like them into their story and making them related to one of the cast are, more often than not, poorly done wish fulfillment to justify some sort of power up with the character they're related to.

But you actually managed to make them fit into the story. Their reason for having the family name "Arc" actually feels believable rather than just lip service in order to integrate them to the RWBY world.

I was quite entertained with how you executed the story. The characters are quite self aware and they're all used quite cleverly. This isn't a feat many of us can do. For a comedy skit, you actually took the time to explain Jaune's past and build up on that leading to the story we have now.

However, I have to point out: from Tifa's observation Pyrrha is lacking in the chest department which isn't at all true from the cannon material. She may not look like it, but our favorite spartan is actually 6 feet tall and her chest size is anything but modest. Her choice of attire even emphasizes that. Still, it was pretty funny because I thought that Tifa was just sizing her up due to her overly protective mother instincts and saying things she didn't really mean. As an Arkos shipper, I wanted to see more interaction between Pyrrha and Mama Arc.

Overall, despite both Cloud and Tifa making a cameo in the RWBY world, Tifa was definitely the highlight of the story. Not to say that this is bad in anyway. I just wanted to point out that Cloud is strangely in the background for the most part and only really shines during Chapter 2.

Thank you for the great read! I am hoping to see a fic in regards to Juane's sisters since you did mention that he has a crazy family.

Urgh... That bitchy Weiss is too much. I get that she's not in good terms with Jaune but there's a difference between not liking a guy and probably thanking god if he got horribly murdered.

YES!YESSS!YESSS! NORA FOR THE WIN #SLOTHS FOREEEVEEER

Like many of your others, an enjoyable story through and through.
I don't think it was intentional but it parallels a string of black and white comic panels on Deviantart that also says Jaune is related to various blond haired people through siblings or ancestors. I can't remember who did them but they say Cassandra and Sophia from Soul Calibur as weapon makers and fighters. Link from Legend of Zelda if the hero great great grandfather. And I think Samus from Metriod as a sister but am not sure on that last one.
Still a good story.
One note is that according to official heights, Yang is like 5'8"-5'10" (I have seen both) while tifa is about 5'6. It would have been funny in the outtakes to make on on the sheer difference in height scale between the world.

Why does everyon use the game Buster Sword and not the six-in-one featured in th movie?

This is the best kind of manipulative Ozpin! I love the line about civilized violence.

This was nice. A good change of pace from some stuff. I had the cross over figured out in the chase scene thought. Sounded real familiar. Really good to match that up with the death battle. The bloopers chapter had me weak for super long...lost track of time. Keep it up.

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Given the fact that you mentioned Desth Battle, any and all respect I have for you is gone.

'Ren met her gaze... and smirked.' I'm sorry but I really gotta ask, what's this and that's it mean cause I do enjoy a good ren and jaune bromance and the occasional romance but I have never seen this.

Really amusing deleted scenes.

Heh, a different perspective is nice but I hope next chapter actually continues the story.