I'll wait as long as I can but I do hope to see this update again
This is one of my favorites alongside other fanfics I have seen. May I ask if there'll be moments of Envy and greed bickering or Envy meeting other characters?

I shall patiently wait for this tale to continue unwinding... (I love Envy centric fics and have a hard time finding good ones so I'll hold onto this until it ends XD)

I expected it to be Edward and Alphonse to be honest

R u still writing

R u still active or do I abandon the story it’s really good pls continue

I like how you explained more of Roy's motivations. I wonder exactly what plans he has up his sleeve...

Also, you repeated the same chapter twice. I think that was a mistake, so I'm just letting you know.

Demons are evil.

Nice chapter , and envy is quite cute in this story , yet not really out of character . Something went wrong here , the chapter appears twice

Great fan fanfic, plase continue

I think bonus chapters or fillers sound like a good idea! They could be fun to read and definitely a great idea if they help out any writers block. Can't wait to see more :)

It would be totally okay with me if you did bonus chapter about the other characters! In fact, I would like that. :)

Don't worry about the delay, btw. I hope you get better soon!

I'm actually really enjoying the story so far~ I'm always a fan of redemption fic's and this one seems like it's going well. I'd like to see how all the Homunculi adjust to their new lives and if, not just Envy, are they're still resentful of the humans who took down their first father. So far, it's looking good and your writing style is definitely keeping me entertained.

I was totally surprised by Mustang being their new parent! I didn't expect it at all, but the way you explained it seemed pretty plausible.

I really like this story so far. :) I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

OMG! I never would've guessed it was Mustang but I LOVE the idea! It's so much better than anyone else it could've been! This is definitely so far one of the best fan fictions I've read, I hope you keep continuing it! I can't wait to keep reading to the next chapter! I don't even have any criticism, you're a great writer

Please update I wanna know who the parents are! I have a feeling it's Ed or Al ;D but I'm probably wrong. Please update this story is great!