| Reviews for Helix's Greatest Creation - Book 1 of Helix Trilogy |
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HEROTYTY13 chapter 4 . 3/28 damn you. you didn't write any smut |
marymoore3686 chapter 12 . 1/6/2019 update please |
UNKWN chapter 12 . 9/19/2018 it was a nice read but i disapprove of the showing of percy as merely as a toy why did u let them share him. but anyways it was a masterpiece thank u for writing this PS i dont usually do reviews but i see potential in u. ;) thats kinda rhymed u know |
BoredPerson86 chapter 4 . 5/26/2018 No lemon, damn. Also no Thalia? |
Guest chapter 5 . 12/1/2017 Zeus: I don't always poop. But when I do,...HOLY SHIT! |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/1/2017 GO FUCK YOURSELF APHRODITE! |
Guest chapter 2 . 12/1/2017 If I was Percy I would say: -WHAT DA HECK/HELL/HADES/FUCK/CHAOS IS GOING ON HERE! |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/25/2017 I love this story and it barely the 3 chapter |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/29/2017 nice |
Scipio Marcellus chapter 8 . 12/16/2016 If it were not for the fact that those women are psychotic i'ld gladly trade places with percy |
son-of-THANATOSxe chapter 4 . 11/4/2016 it's annoying he refers to her as "my mate" only |
son-of-THANATOSxe chapter 6 . 11/4/2016 if I were him I'd freeze time and put thalia in my place using my primordial powers to make her look like me. |
TyquanUchiha chapter 10 . 10/30/2016 I love how you make him faint. |
Mas2060 chapter 6 . 10/29/2016 That is truly unfortunate for percy, never able to catch a break. Now he has the angry and very powerful sister of his mate, after him. |
Guest chapter 9 . 9/6/2016 Next thing we know, Nebula is actually Order disguised as Nebula comb letting this part of the rite |