Reviews for Helix's Greatest Creation - Book 1 of Helix Trilogy
HEROTYTY13 chapter 4 . 3/28
damn you. you didn't write any smut
marymoore3686 chapter 12 . 1/6/2019
update please
UNKWN chapter 12 . 9/19/2018
it was a nice read but i disapprove of the showing of percy as merely as a toy
why did u let them share him.
but anyways it was a masterpiece
thank u for writing this
PS
i dont usually do reviews but i see potential in u.
;)
thats kinda rhymed u know
BoredPerson86 chapter 4 . 5/26/2018
No lemon, damn. Also no Thalia?
Guest chapter 5 . 12/1/2017
Zeus: I don't always poop. But when I do,...HOLY SHIT!
Guest chapter 3 . 12/1/2017
GO FUCK YOURSELF APHRODITE!
Guest chapter 2 . 12/1/2017
If I was Percy I would say:
-WHAT DA HECK/HELL/HADES/FUCK/CHAOS IS GOING ON HERE!
Guest chapter 3 . 7/25/2017
I love this story and it barely the 3 chapter
Guest chapter 2 . 5/29/2017
nice
Scipio Marcellus chapter 8 . 12/16/2016
If it were not for the fact that those women are psychotic i'ld gladly trade places with percy
son-of-THANATOSxe chapter 4 . 11/4/2016
it's annoying he refers to her as "my mate" only
son-of-THANATOSxe chapter 6 . 11/4/2016
if I were him I'd freeze time and put thalia in my place using my primordial powers to make her look like me.
TyquanUchiha chapter 10 . 10/30/2016
I love how you make him faint.
Mas2060 chapter 6 . 10/29/2016
That is truly unfortunate for percy, never able to catch a break. Now he has the angry and very powerful sister of his mate, after him.
Guest chapter 9 . 9/6/2016
Next thing we know, Nebula is actually Order disguised as Nebula comb letting this part of the rite
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