Reviews for The Breaking
rainbow461830 chapter 8 . 7/16/2019
Just finished all 8 chapters I enjoyed this story. It's probably to late put in any requests but thank you for writing a Dean-centered story without any slash. Dean is my favorite character and I hate reading slash.
Chick Feed chapter 8 . 12/18/2015
Excellent fic. I find your style easy to read and like the fact that you don't just head straight to writing the action without bothering to include a back story. Also like how carefully you consider emotional impacts, not just physical, and how you wrote the characters as people who have their weaknesses, rather than "super humaning" them. Very thoughtfully constructed fic.
Hugs,
Chick xxx
AFanGirlof5sos chapter 8 . 12/8/2015
If you want a Christmas one shot then maybe do one of Dean and human!Cas got sick and Dean have to take care of him? Well awesome chapter!
NoilyPrat chapter 8 . 12/7/2015
Thanks for wrapping up. Memory wipe - good on occasions, bad on others. Neither of them understood Alastair's comments about Hell, because of the memory wipe.

And Dean, making sure Sam will be looked after, when everything goes down.
Clare Hope chapter 8 . 12/7/2015
Yay! I'm sorry to see this story end, I really enjoyed it, but I'm looking forward to reading all of your Christmas stories! Deck the halls of the bunker with holly. ~Clare (ps I really like Christmas stories about the boys decorating for the holidays and bonus points if Cas is confused about how the traditions have changed. If you want to write something like that, I'd love to read it! :) )
Tisha Wyman chapter 8 . 12/7/2015
This was a fantastic story. I'm going to look and see if you are on ARchive and subscribe.
babyreaper chapter 8 . 12/7/2015
Glad that Dean was feeling a little better physically if not mentally. I doubt he will ever be 100% in that department. And he and Sam are safe for the time being. Really enjoyed reading it, Thx.
Wunjo chapter 8 . 12/7/2015
Great story! Loved the interactions - totally hit the spot.
lenail125 chapter 8 . 12/7/2015
I liked the end! Poor Dean with all of this on his shoulder! But I liked that beside everything he can trust Castiel and the only think important to him is Sammy well being...

You can write a shot about Dean, as a teenager, doing his best to give Sam a good Christmas day!
Tisha Wyman chapter 7 . 12/7/2015
I love that you had Dean kill Uriel instead of Anna. There is still some fight in him. That was good to see.
Tisha Wyman chapter 6 . 12/7/2015
The ending of this chapter was totally heart breaking. I imagine Dean really did cry like that.
mckydstarlight chapter 8 . 12/7/2015
I really really enjoyed this fic. It was amazing! You should do a Christmas fic and make it like some sort of family Christmas in the bunker with Charlie and Kevin and maybe even Jodi Mills. Claire and Alex and Cas could be there. And anybody else I amy have forgotten. I also think maybe giving Dean a broken ankle because he fell off of a ladder while hanging decorations would be good to because then you could show Jodi mothering him and him pretending to be annoyed but secretly loving it. I'm not sure if the timeline lines up for Claire to be there but if it doesn't I understand.
Tisha Wyman chapter 5 . 12/7/2015
Oh my! I hope Cas and Sam get him out of there.
Tisha Wyman chapter 4 . 12/7/2015
This is so good, but poor Dean. I feel so bad for him.
Tisha Wyman chapter 3 . 12/7/2015
This is so excellent. Much better then what the writers did on the show.
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