NOOOO I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S FINISHED! I'm so obsessed with your work. Between this and Titans Together you are the master of BBRae

Yeess! I was waiting for their reunion and cried so bad

YESSSS A KISSS!

Awesome story. I lover the way you portrayed Kori. The story line was excellent.

This was absolutely amazing. This is the first story I've read from you , i figured you were good but not THIS good. Everything was well thought out, the plot was engaging, the character development realistic.. and the writing, stunning. Thank you

I love this fic, damn it. It is one of my favorites.

But I always had the question of what Vic's accident had been

Listen to Daylight by Maroon 5 and read chapter 30. Damn.

Puerto Vallarta is on the pacific coast, I assume Blood isn't stupid enough to give his star guest a room that doesn't face the ocean; that means BB's room will see the sun set, not rise.
Also omg tgat meeting was so tense, I can only imagine what it must feel like to not be unable, but not be alowed to be able to defend yourself. I fear for what Blood's angle is here. Call me paranoid, but fans showing up at the beachcomber felt fishy to me, followed by Blood suggesting that they spit up... He's got plans. So much so that I fear he purposefully ditched his wallet and keycard.
I'll have to see tomorrow I guess,
Tuonra
Ps: don't take my 'corrections' too seriously, it's more that I think it's funny to pretend they are 'fatal flaws' of the story or something like that. But I understand people can feel very protective of their writing and I don't want to give the wrong i
idea.

What did he get stabbed with that he needed 10 stitches? A snowshovel?
Other than that, awesome chapter.
I find women with their hair down loads more attractive, but she is a secretary here so bun it

Woohoo! So far all fears ablated! No pretending to be weak and vulnerable to get swooped up by Blood. I'm sorry if I was too assuming with that other review, but to be fair it looks like you meant to make that train of thought 'the obvious'. But using it to make Mento once again look amoral was a stroke of genius!
Tuonra

Ooh, you loved writing it? and I loved reading that chapter!
Action like that/ comic book violence is a great balance to the romantic tension. Wish Raven would have flat-out admitted that she intervened in the fight because she enjoyed the idea of a fight. I can only imagine Garfield's face at the reveal of her violent thrill, should be expected in her line of work if anything.
Tuonra

Oh god, I see where this is going. Girls with no families being abducted and sold, in the same chapter we get to hear how raven has no parents anymore (well who knows if lord Tri-gun is still alive). Now that I mention it, if Raven does have let herself get seduced by Blood (I hope not) then her using her, I'm assuming gang connection, to the Tri-guns as a last resort, all-guns-blazing style solution to break down Blood Rouge and Slade, I'd be cool with that.
But aside from that, this is an example of why bond villains or the like in movies are always blowing up the moon with lasers or robbing banks of diamonds. It's a 'safe' evil plan, not one that makes you feel uncomfortable and a little disappointed in mankind, like say human trafficking and prostitution rinks would.
Your story from the outset is about Raven and BB having to unite despite their differences, and in fanficky style learn that they are destined for each other. That's what I clicked on the story for in any case; that and the whole spy fantasy. You kinda sprung the gritty themes on me. While I trust your story is going to be excellent as it has been, just thought I'd share this idea. Maybe this even still gets read, who knows!Tuonra

I’m sucked in! I haven’t made a comment until now because I couldn’t stop haha. Excellent writing and character building

I am literally OBSESSED with this story! So good! You're super talented!

I know it’s a long shot but I’m loving this story. And made some day would love to see a sequel of some kind. Hey...we can dream.