Despite having so many chapters it was rather short. I finished it in a day, but it was very satisfying. I liked the moments with the kids saying their names wrong. It was funny. Into my favorites.

For future stories, maybe you should have a rough draft notebook. That's what I use. Write your chapters, and then when you go to type it up you can add or take away anything you want or don't want, and the chapters could be longer. That's what I do :)

How could you kill her parents!? What is wrong with you!? :O

I loved all of it!
I love your twist on the whole show, which is what I honestly think a fanfic is supposed to be.

I really wish Gaara had somebody like this in the show!
Good job, can't wait to read the side story.

*speechless*

I'm sad now, I didn't think you'd end it :'(

Is Rue jinjuriki of the yin half of Shukaku

More please. I love it. Funny too. *whispers* I just hope they don't cath on Rue's Pervy mind

OHHHHHHHH. RUE AND GAARA ARE HAVING AN ADJOINING ROOM!

What's next. Later we are going to see Rue prego with Gaara's baby. Then someone is going to cut is balls off for getting her prego

Aww Rue if you nned someone you have me. *Pushes Naruto away. Hugs Rue*

*points at rue and laughs* Really. That image keeps playing in your mind *wiggles eyebrows*

Mmm...Rue is a perv xd.
Keep on with your story, it's very good

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA. *pats rue* was it nice

Hahahaha. Gaara almost spilled the beans. ANd Damn neji seemed to fall in love with her already