This just gave me diabetes .oh god its so freacking cute . I love it!

hey um ;;;;;;;; nat here!

I'm sorry I neglected reading the new chapters for so long D: the truth is, when I read the first chapter I got SO emotional and cried a bunch (happy tears!) and so whenever I saw that the fic updated, I was like "oh no, I'm gonna cry all over again!"

well, I'm finally caught up! and yes, I did cry...Really, this fic makes me so unbelievably happy ;-; I wanted to SCREAM when I saw that prince carrot appeared! I was OVERJOYED omg thank you so much...thank you for writing it, thank you for considering my feelings so much, thank you for doing it REALLY WELL! You are legitimately so so so wonderful :'D sniff...I hope you have a great day! no, I hope you have a great life starting from today until FOREVER

That is so cute!

So far, so good.

First review of 2018! I really love the way you have the stroy reimagined. I hate Cordelia and to see a caring figure with Ayato is a great reprise from the coldness of his mum. Please update soon.

Love it

Wow amazing hope you continue it pleasee?

I love the whole story! :D :) When do you think you will upload the next chapter? I'm so surprised you do not have MORE FOLLOWERS. :0

Awwwwwwww! I Want to see more!

I really like this the brothers deserve I kinder figure in their life. Although you got the order of the brother's wrong (Laito's the oldest while Ayato's the youngest) It's well written and Natalie seems like a good character.

I need to find out what happens next! Chapter 3 please!

Keep up the good work! This is extremely well written!

Lovely start. Looking forward to seeing how you develop Natalie as a character!