Huh.
Orochimaru just signed up for an untimely death.
The poor snake.

Hope you update

Uh oh

What an interesting turn of events! Is there perchance that you would continue this fic?

Please update soon they should go to konoha after they get his siblings

Honestly, I like this story line more than the other. I think Shiroheki met Kakashi too prematurely in the other story line. I think the situation should escalate (go to hell) before Kakashi is even involved. That's more exciting. Whereas this story line has great potential for a focus on adventure and drama, the other story line seems more focused on family, which is a bit too much fluff for my personal preference. But of course, this crossover in itself is a fantastic idea and you're a very good writer! Kudos! And please write more!

I'll just like to say that this plot is awesome!
Really appreciate this and am looking forward to the next chapter!
I'd also like to point out that wouldn't it be awesome if Shiroheki became part of Akatsuki? preferably after killing Orochimaru?
Anyway, loved the story. Thank you for posting it!

Uh oh.

Shiroheki is looking murderous!

They better run as fast as they can.

Those bastards!

Uh oh.

I hope he gets the kids back without taking to much damage to himself or them. I feel kinda bad I like this more than the main story, but I feel that this might be more interesting. Anyway I really like this story and the main one, thank you for writing them!

My heart...the puppies!

Interesting storyline. I look forward to seeing what will happen differently here.

Awesome. Gotta love the alternate timeline stories.
This should be fun to watch.
Thanks for writing!

I look forward to more :)