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pixypage chapter 6 . 7/20 Omg! Please update, please update, please update! I gotta know how and when Emily slipped Ben the pills. Always how this will affect Emaya's relationship. Also, will Em get caught? Did she have help? Ahhhh, so anxious to know more. Thanks for the story! I really miss emaya. This hepls! |
sphe chapter 6 . 11/19/2017 Type your review here. that's was super I like every part of it thnx n plzzz keep up da gd work SHIP EMAYA FOREVER |
ash chapter 6 . 9/5/2016 more and more i fall in love with this story...pls update |
mimi chapter 1 . 9/5/2016 When are we expecting an update? I know you're doing the best you can, but please, an update will help fix my emaya's heart thanks.. |
leekwan chapter 6 . 9/3/2016 Hi salsa, Very intense and serious last couple of updates, but definitely the right thing to do! Ben, Noel, and the group that decided to become part of Team-Ben, deserve everything that they get, but most readers agree with comments from some of your other reviewers, that they nor I want Emily to get into trouble because of those sick bastards. Now that I think about it, and maybe you can add it into an update; I mean when Lauren, Jess, and Katie confronted Emily about showering with them and accusing Emily of perving out on them. I would have loved to see Emily tell them that neither of them should be concerned about that because they are totally not her type...Lol. That would have really got to them and pissed them off, especially with their distorted and warped egos. i hears that like when you updated chapter 5, many of the readers cried thinking again about just how sick Ben and his followers were, ready to rape Maya to get back at Emily because of his damn bruised ego, and I am including the girls like Jess and her ass kissing friends as well. Everyone of course is very happy that the police showed up before anything could happen to Maya, but Ben, Noel, and the other guys who were ready to participate in raping Maya should at the very least be expelled from Rosewood High and they should receive Sex Offender status on their police records too! As for Jess and her friends who were more than ready to help Ben and the other guys rape Maya, thy should be banded from participating in any extracurricular activities at the school, which means being kicked off of the swimming team, and they should be suspended for at least 2 weeks as well. Maybe Jess and those girls who ass her ass should also receive Sex Offender status, it will teach everyone a darn good lesson about harassing other people for being different. People were very surprised but happy to see Pam show Maya the kindness and support that she did, even allowing Maya to sleep in Emily's bedroom with her; that was sweet. We always love the beautiful. sweet, and sexy interplay between Maya & Emily and how they support one another. As for the pills, we do not believe that Emily gave any of those pills to Ben, and are even thinking that Ben knew that he would not be in any real danger and could have set it up to look as though Emily was trying to kill him; it would put all of the attention on her and give him his revenge against Emily if she went to prison, and it would take the heat off of him for the attempted rape of Maya. Didn't Ben's father own a Drug Store or something, and if so, then could he know about the pills that Emily's father took? Could he have broken into the house, maybe using a key of Emily's house that he had manged to get an impression of and then made a copy of? I do want Emily to not only get Ben, Norl, and the other guys, but Jess and her group as well. Again, an intense and thrilling update that the readers really loved, and the numbers say it all salsa! Feedback and comments from readers as of this review numbered over 246,849. We are looking for the next update, and by the way, congratulations on reaching over a million words on Fanfic with your awesome Emaya stories. Mai |
SethuEmaya chapter 6 . 9/1/2016 Did She? Dude...i seriously hope she didn't, as much as i think he deserves it...this could mean serious trouble for Emily. Not to mention how Pam is gonna react to this! Team Emily better win this battle but i want her to win legally, not by breaking the law. I just hope that Maya will be able to get through to her before she does something stupid...if she hasn't already. Anyway thank you for updating...been a while. Cant wait for the next one :-) . |
C chapter 6 . 9/1/2016 I feel like I jus watched/read an episode of SVU. The re-runs are one of my guilty pleasures ;) It's obvious to assume Emily is the suspect, but I know you don't live in the world of predictability and we want to keep that trust within Emaya ya. The trust issue alone for Em since she looks really good for this is going to explode with drama. Imagine everyone pointing toward Em and Maya being the only one standing by her. A real "No one puts baby in the corner" moment ya. But who could the real culprit/s be? I'm still not sold on Alexa. I mean she kept Emily preoccupied. As for Jess and her minions - unleash Hanna Haha! Till next Cheers xo! |
Guest chapter 6 . 8/31/2016 That's good for ben u hope her mother go easy on her.. they should punish everyone that was involved. . |
Guest chapter 6 . 8/31/2016 Glad your back and updating , hope all is well. I'm so here for Emily getting revenge. What Ben did was horrible he deserves it |
Guest chapter 6 . 8/31/2016 Smh two wrongs dont make a right Emily. I hope this case doesn't back fires on her |
saky chapter 5 . 4/25/2016 wooo that was intense and hella scary to me tbh. They're are fictionnal characters but I love them soo much that it's ridiculous x) So this chapter was WOOO to me like ugh why would he do this to her, why would this to her ? Lol Keep up Salsa I love this story and all the others, THANK YOU so much for keeping them alive (!) |
Mo chapter 5 . 4/12/2016 They better not get away with it. they alldeserve to ve raped in the anus |
Emayan chapter 5 . 4/9/2016 Wow I wasn't expecting this. I was pissed and heart was racing. Keep going please |
PllFan1998 chapter 5 . 4/9/2016 Love it! Please continue! |
Nikita chapter 5 . 4/7/2016 I had literally thought about this story days before your update. I'm glad you're still writing. This chapter had me like nooooooooo he better not and I was genuinely unsure if anyone would be able to stop him. I'm glad it didn't get to rape but poor Maya! She's going to have no memory of it yet everyone will know with it being on tape or live feed that's so sad and disturbing because like you said these things actually do happen. What will Em do, it's a terrible place to be for both of them. Loved the update you have me in suspense as always. |