good read so far. sorry we haven't gotten too much farther into her recovery and the venom tape reveal seems like it would be spectacular. hope you return some day. thanks.

Please continue this story, it's amazing!

Awesome work

I remember following this story (before I had a FanFiction account) when it all started out years ago. A shame no update on this had come since then.

Nonetheless, I really enjoyed this Metal Gear Solid Fanfic above many others in this site, your take on known characters, events, and your imaginative writing style are what I enjoyed most about this.

Still hoping an update comes,
d-clarence signing off

As others have commented, not sure if this will be touched for quite a while but I thought i'd give my thoughts. Probably the best (if not top 2) MGS V Snake/Quiet story I have read. As others have pointed out the idea behind choices having consequences I will go a different path. This genuinely seems like the path Venom Snake would choose for the most part. The difference between the original big boss and his phantom. Would the original BB gets this upset over a love? Would his life go to a standstill? It seems the idea of completing Outer Heaven and protecting everyone would take precedent.

Would love to see this updated to see the reaction of Quiet and how they escape the hospital. As I said, high marks and wish it would be continued. There aren't many stories of this grouping of Snake/Quiet, and it's worded extremely, extremely well. Hope to see it continued.

While I doubt this will be updated again any time soon, I do hope you at least get to see review.

This story is fantastic in every sense of the word. The detail is top notch, and the plot so far is rock solid. What really stands out to me though, is that you make things have a price. Even if it makes me sad that things can't be as positive as possible, I really respect the fact that there are consequences for the feel good stuff. Like the refugee platform being burned to the ground because Snake saved Quiet. For lack of a better phrase, it's like a "wake up call" for the reader. Something that says, "yeah what you wanted to succeed did succeed, but it wasn't without a price."

I think you're a very intelligent and creative writer, and I wish you all the best with whatever you're currently pursuing.

this story's awesome I'm just wish I didn't have to wait. for the next chapter

tbh i dont blame him for reacting the way be did

Please update soon, even just a comment would be wonderful. Your writing is fantastic and I want to read more!

I absolutely love your writing. I've read your work four times already. Please update soon, I'm so excited to read more of this!

Well, i've been following this since the beginning. and you know what? Excellent.. This is an excellent follow up to The Phantom Pain, giving it further connections to the MSX games and the rest of the series. this is absolutely incredible. In my mind, this is Canon :)

You said you will be updating. Where are you? Come on, you can't leave this story 8'(

Man now I wish we could get an Osprey VTOL in The Phantom Pain

This was awesome! I have been looking for this kind of story for long Time. I hope that you will continue to make this story even further. PS. If my english is bad, it because I'm from Finland and I just woke up

This story is fucking amazing I cannot wait to read more. You're doing a good job with this story.