Amazing story. I love it.

God chapter.

With the rumple looking for desperate peaple to make deals with. I smell two that are ripe for the picking.

Good chapter, but not much plot changing this chapter.

I love there reactions to each other.

It's like kyubey has a Monopoly on granting wishes, but Rumpel comes in opens a stor with usually lower prices, and much better deals all around.

Unless you are amount lucky few who can profits and don't mind the consequences of the wish kyubey grants.

I am exited to see were this goes.

Omg this was SO good!
Okay, I know this fanfictjon is pretty old, but it's really good. I really enjoyed it especially with how you integrated everything into the story. I can really see a sequel of this getting even crazier and even more interesting. I dealt want to see what happens to Rumple and whatnot.

I might be late but holy crap from the moment I began to read this I couldn't stop. I should probably stop because it's like 1AM but I had to get this out. As someone who's been obsessed with Madoka Magica and Once Upon a Time for a long time, this was like a breath of fresh air for me. For me to see a crossover of some of my favorite shows itself is amazing, but the story itself and how much thought you put into this is what instantly got me hooked, especially with Rumplestillskin's motives and Madoka's character itself. Also another thing that got to me was the relationship between Mami and Kyoko as well as the incubators being able to feel emotion. I would say more but it would just be rambling at how you you were able to make such a great story in just 7 chapters.

This is a brilliantly done story, truly under appreciated in the world of fanfiction. If you are indeed working on a direct sequel to this work, please try to make it fit within canon as much as possible. Hope to see it!

I absolutely love this story. And I do say that the fate of the characters is the most befitting and in Homura's/Heidi's case it's almost kind while being agonizing at the same time, living your first school day every day and what you did for Kyubey, I loved reading his breakdown. You did great job writing this, thank you.

It is Awesome! I love how you have mixed OUaT into a Madoka verse, especially Heart being the container for a soul, in a twisted way it makes so much sense. And yeas I completely agree with you, But did you notice that in a way Sayaka's situation is very similar and yet vastly different to Mami's (the way how she became a Magical Girl)? Both are at very crucial moment in their lives and their time running out. Mami Grab's her only available option to life with out a moment of hesitation, Sayaka actually has a moment and is at her lowest point ready to give up. Mami regrets not using her wish more wisely since her family died and Sayaka knows what would happen but doesn't fully understand the deepness of despair she's pushing Kyosuke into since she saw only a small portion of it before making her wish. Kyubey told practically nothing to Mami and Rumple told practically everything to Sayaka expect the little detail that he may or may not kill himself.
Keep up great work.