| Reviews for A Step too Far |
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   daggercloak000 chapter 11 . 1/7 Wow. Dont make this fic dead please |
| WHlSKEY chapter 11 . 12/6/2019 I guess this story is dead huh? Unfortunate. I can see this going so many different places. It was good while it lasted. |
| Evangel and jack-o chapter 11 . 6/21/2019 While I may not have criticism or ideas for you, I have a question; will you continue this? If not I completely understand, writing can be one helluva pain, but I do hope you add more to it. All the best without the worst -e&j |
| demiread chapter 11 . 10/31/2018 this is awesome i hope you get more inspiration for more chapters! |
| A happy follower chapter 11 . 10/28/2018 At long last! Another chapter! I am happy that you are not dead, hence ,this story will continue. Been waiting for far too long! |
| Dune Arksmith chapter 4 . 10/8/2018 Negative: I mean... it's not bad this story, a little annoyed at how you seemed to be going with the cliche plotline of random guardian to fast or powerful for anyone else on remnant, when Qrow has a casual FTE Combat speed during his fight with winter and MACH 2 combat speed at least during his fight with Tyrian (blocking his bullets) No Guardian has never achieved anything on those levels. Neutral: I am curious to see in future chapters how you plan to handle the Original blake plotline (I am in chapter 3 right now) with the whole thing of blake being so young at this point do you abandon her and time skip several years? so that she rejoins the white fang and the Plothole with Adam if filled? Positive: Your writing ability and grammer and structure seems to be good, plot is easy to follow and I like the fact that your trying to make original content in your chapters. 6/10 Stars, a little cliche in terms of guardians status, but better than most fanfictions. |
| RazerLazerFazer chapter 1 . 9/17/2018 I was into the story until you made Jaune a casanova. He is EXTREMELY ooc and the whole point of his character is to be the relatable dude with no powers. |
| Disabled-doctor chapter 11 . 9/10/2018 good story |
| blackdog420 chapter 11 . 9/1/2018 are you going to let team rwby in the loop about blake father being undercover that would make it interesting and show there was no betrayal but for the greater good for the safety of the kingdoms |
| Yang Xiao Longer chapter 11 . 9/1/2018 Hoo boy. So, I have to ask. Are you planning on updating this consistently again? Well, after you get over your writers block, anyway. As for any ideas and suggestions, I think focusing on Praetor doing jobs for Cinder would be a good way to kinda get back into the swing of things! |
| BrutusPrimus chapter 11 . 8/31/2018 Well, after last and his chapter, I really suggest focusing on character building before moving forward with the story. That’s my two cents. |
| Father of the Legion chapter 1 . 8/31/2018 FUCK YEAH WELLCOME BACK BRO |
| Slim A Lou Prime chapter 11 . 8/31/2018 He's alive! Humm story ideas. Let me think. Oh how about a scene were predator goes full on titan mode, as in unstoppable tank, and wipes out (insert faction here) sparing no one in his fury. |
| GamerDroid56 chapter 10 . 3/27/2018 I’ve kept an eye on this fix for awhile and I REALLY hope you come back to it even though it’s been a couple of years. It’s a damn fine premise and you’ve done really well with it. If you have chosen to abandon it, you could see if someone’s willing to adopt it. |
| Guest chapter 10 . 12/31/2017 Can’t wait for the next update |
