| Reviews for Inhuman |
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Guest chapter 15 . 4/1/2018 Dont feel bad about telling us are human and you are allowed to have feelings and emotions I hope that your classmates will stop teasing you because you seem really nice from the little i know about let the haters get you down |
Catzillataco chapter 16 . 3/24/2018 Such a good story! I really enjoy this idea and the humor is really good too! |
Please Revise chapter 16 . 8/10/2017 The idea of the story is sound, the fact that we see a female Dick Grayson that gets kidnapped, and injected with powers is a good thought... Sadly...The way you executed this was poorly. I found myself cringing st a majority of the story due to how rushed it was, nothing truly flowed like a good story would, and it all felt highly forced, even the romantic feelings felt heavily forced. And as I read further in the story the more I'd cringe. Everything was like a messy cooking recipie. Thrown together and hoped that it would come out perfect. Furthermore, you've established Robin...Or whoever she is now, as a Mary Sue, further degrading the humanity of her character. My advice? Get a beta reader, stop rushing chapters |
Guest chapter 16 . 7/5/2017 Omg I love this! Agh I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope things get better for you Hun! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/5/2017 I'm doing for an update I love this story so much. I can't wait to see what else happens to Riley. She is such a badass! I love the fatherly love tension between Bats and Supes! |
Guest chapter 16 . 5/4/2017 You can do it! I'm loving this hope to the next chapter comes out soon |
Joker's Daughter chapter 16 . 1/19/2017 Please continue! |
grayson4life chapter 16 . 11/3/2016 You updated I have never been so happy ! |
TheGirlOfTheSeasons chapter 12 . 7/20/2016 İ was listening to Safe and Sound by Taylor Swift while i was reading this chapter and Superman's lullaby is that song 0-0 |
DaisyTheKitten chapter 15 . 7/7/2016 Almost the same thing happened to me, I was miserable for a long time after that. But it does get better, with time and therapy it does, I'm at a point were I've never been happier and I hope you get there too. Best of luck and I hope you continue the story soon! (: |
grayson4life chapter 15 . 7/4/2016 wow i hopeccome bsck soon love this story and you seem like a very nice person |
AryaZEvans chapter 3 . 5/27/2016 Is her name Riley, or Agatha... |
Guest chapter 15 . 5/23/2016 dont hate yourself i feel like that sometimes and ohnestly when i was reading this it was like you read my mind and wrote all of this and that makes you one of the special people in my life and i read this story all the time ,when i am sad ,happy,or anytime actually and those kids should just go to hell because what they did is unforgivable . so i really hope if you read this it made you feel a tad bit better |
Guest chapter 8 . 5/23/2016 two dads and one mom ... this is gonna be complicated |
PikaWings chapter 15 . 5/14/2016 Just stay strong. I've been through something similar too‚ but mine lasted for 6 years (all grade school) only because I didn't do anything‚ didn't tell anybody anymore because they would say I'm over reacting. It's three years later since I left grade school but I'm still dealing with the concequences if my in-action. I only recently started writing‚ but no matter‚ I'd be totally crushed too if my friend told my class about it. Please don't make the same mistake I did and tell people that care‚ understand‚ and will do something about it. If anybody tells you you're over reacting‚ you're not‚ you're reacting normally to an abnormal amount of bullshit. Wake up everyday‚ and tell yourself that if you could believe in Santa for 8(?) years‚ you can surely believe in yourself for a day. You're never alone‚ you'll never not matter to anybody‚ there are always people out there that don't like you. But. For every person that doesn't like you‚ there are 5 that do. Whenever you feel alone‚ there are hundreds upon thousands of people that understand what you've been through and will gladly help you get through. And because you WRITE‚ because YOU'RE NOT AFFRAID TO DO WHAT YOU LIKE‚ because YOU ARE YOURSELF‚ you will always matter. You are an example to other people‚ people that are too afraid to be themselves and live sad‚ dull lives‚ and show them that it is OKAY to BE YOURSELF and DO WHAT YOU LIKE‚ NO MATTER WHAT OTHERS THINK. They'll look at you‚ and they won't see the weak little girl that got bullied for doing something she loved‚ they'll see the strong woman that overcame the troubles that come with being who you want to be and rose above the people that tried to break her. They'll see the grateness that I know you can be. Better times always come‚ believe me‚ and then‚ you'll be gatefull for not giving up on doing stuff you like. If you ever need someone to talk to‚ just PM me. |