Reviews for Ending Story
theayda chapter 1 . 5/8/2018
This is so beautiful
emeraldinecyanne chapter 1 . 1/6/2017
Oh my goodness! I know I can't properly review nor create a constructive criticism but I would love to let you know how much my heart fluctuates every time I read your story. From the beginning up to the end, this story never failed to show me the beauty of Ritsu and Masamune's love. I can never tire from re-reading this all over and over again. Thank you for your wonderful imagination, my day is made! :)
Tanya The Evil chapter 1 . 7/8/2016
You've seen Mimic haven't you? ;)
jandixjunpyo chapter 1 . 6/29/2016
Ive honestly read this like 20 times, but still, it never ceases to make me smile. Its just so, whats the word?-brilliant.
I know ive told you before, but you write so well. You stories are real, and they speak to your readers.
THere are alot of your stories where ONE goddamn line will make me cry. And still, everytime i go back and reread your stories, i just smile. They are just too good for words.
You have a gift, really, and you are one of the best writers on fanfiction. (i am being VERY honest with you right now). You place this real life aura and emotion that just makes someone want to laugh, cry, and be sad and happy all at the same time. I just really wanted to tell you how much i love what you write. You amazing. I have no other words to express how much praise and credit i give you as a writer. I always look forward to your fanfics.
-J.J.
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 6/28/2016
THIS IS JUST TOO GREAT!
SO GREAT!
SO BEAUTIFULLY WONDERFULLY FANTASTICALLY AWESOME!
I LOVE IT TOO MUCH!

I barely read AU fic in this kind of fandom, but the summary was just too promising and caught my attention.

LOVING IT!
iJustLostmySanity chapter 1 . 4/3/2016
im on my mobile ff app and I just had this haunting urge to screenshot the 'gamble on me ritsu' ... 'you will never lose' and it is just so awesome how I squeeled to tears of joy. so much joy. i love how this is written.
Silent reader chapter 1 . 2/26/2016
Too sweet..! I think l might cry..Wait, l already shed some tears.
Loved it..!
Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 1 . 12/19/2015
Really cute ending.
OnlyDarknessAwaits1369 chapter 1 . 12/12/2015
Shuusetsu-san, why do you always make me cry and make me feel fluffy in the end? Seriously man, most of your stories I've already read had made cry buckets of tears and at the same time left me feeling so touch and contented. Agh! Man, now my eyes are swelling.
tthpf chapter 1 . 12/11/2015
This story had me crying by the middle and giggling happily by the end.. Hehehe :))
jmyuki chapter 1 . 12/1/2015
Very touching indeed! Thanks for the good read!
undercover1721 chapter 1 . 11/28/2015
This is such a good story. I almost cried reading it. How takano felt that he loved ritsu after he dissapeared. U did well
Sarabear2275 chapter 1 . 11/15/2015
I LOVE THIS STORY! It has a happy ending! And it was the perfect length, nothing was wasted, the plot was interesting, and Takano's gradual changes to loving Onodera are so lovely! I'm so happy right now :)
April952 chapter 1 . 10/22/2015
Omg I loved this story! It was so sweet! It made my heart clench with feelings. You outdid yourself with this, I am absolutely in love. I've already read this twice!
I loved the build up, the distress, the yearning, and the joy. Your discriptions were beautiful and the characters were spot on! The metaphor in the end for the pictures was cute. I was laughing when Takano started teasing Ritsu :3 awwww, I just love it so much! Thank you for this! Much love!
vanilla fujotaku chapter 1 . 10/21/2015
this was so sad TvT but...im sorry...i didnt cry...ots not because its not heartbreaking enough but mainly because i read angst that it feel normal to read them without crying :v that aside, all the vocalabury, settings, and how you describe it was good :v keep up the good work
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