I really love this story. I doubt it but I would really appreciate it if you continued it or at least gave it a closure. Being open-ended like this ... it ruins the amazing previous chapters :(

Holy crap. I'm sad I hadn't found this story sooner. I just spent the last week engrossed in reading this tale you have written, and I'm truly impressed with what you've done with this concept. I was a little skeptical when I started it, because I didn't really see what could be done with this setting aside from a comedy/parody format. However, as I read through it, I realized you were able to make it whatever you needed it to be, because of how deeply you understand the characters. You're Anakin is the version I always imagined him as, after I watched return of the jedi growing up. He still has that darkness to him, but doesn't want to let his redeemer down. The only area concerning his character that I don't know if I 100% agree, and forgive me if I'm remembering wrong since I don't recall everything from the first part, is his initial willingness to become a jedi again. I know he realizes that what he did to the jedi was wrong, but he wasn't wrong in believing that the order had helped push him down that path, and maybe it helps that this isn't his original world. I do agree with the ultimate outcome though, especially since he got to rewrite all of the outdated rules that helped lead him to his downfall. Last thing I want to say is, you are great at creating suspense and dread. This being an original story, and me having no frame of reference to how you write, definitely had me on edge more than a few times. I just caught up to where you've left it, and I felt like time froze when I saw there wasn't anymore. I don't know what your current plans are, but It would be a travesty for this to be left unfinished, and I'm sure plenty of people would agree.

Hey, nice story and i just need it to continue for just one more chapter, ive been with this story since it came out and i really want it to end properly. I understand you don't have all the time in the world,
I know that, but i just feel like this story needs a proper end, so please consider it.

Clearly not that far into this story but just had rave a little about how awesome this story is. It's just so brilliant. I love how you've mixed other characters like Palaptine and Ahsoka into it, really well done. Anakin's struggle with his past and dealing with the present is so good, you've nailed it. Padme's dreams/memories are also an excellent feature.

Seriously there is nothing I don't like about this story so far and I'm stoked it's as long as it because there's more to enjoy. Anyway time to get back to reading, need to see what happens next.

omg please update i love this story :)

padme and anilin will kiss...i have foreseen it

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i no joke star ted screaming at everyone "anakin is being selfish and stupid so nobody talk to me!"

if padme and anikin don't kiss in the next chapter i will SCREAM (at the top of my lung ]s to be exact.)

this book inspired me to write my own book, i am not sure what it will be called, but it is gonna be about if Anakin hadn't turned to the dark side

THIS IS AN ABSOLUTE WORK OF ART!

just saying I'm gonna write a review for each chapter because this book is so awsome

love this

dude i was checking how many chapter there were and...86 DUDE! thank you now quarantine will be so much funner yes i know thats not a real word

I confess I've long wanted a fic of this type. Characters in our world without really being a crossover. Perfect.