| Reviews for Mai hoon na |
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  Saundarya chapter 1 . 3/13/2018 good! |
| Anam abhi's fan chapter 1 . 4/2/2017 it was amazing... |
| DUO-MRF chapter 1 . 11/6/2015 My own jaw dropped down reading Daya sir is going to pay the bill, hahaha, waqai "Kala-pani" ki saza hi banti hai Boss iss joke py tou, haha... :P ;) Very sweet and care-filled OS, enjoyed the whole... :) Thanks a lot dear, keep smiling and stay safe and blessed... :) |
 Bhaiya's Chirya chapter 1 . 10/18/2015 Nice stry :-) Loved it :-) ThankU :-) |
| GD chapter 1 . 10/16/2015 awwwww... So Cute and Sweet Concern... Liked that pills Idea... Unexpected one... the PAISY part was Outstanding... Big Laughter Blast... Excellent Attempt again... Thank you so much... |
| Sariya chapter 1 . 10/15/2015 Hahahahaha good one :D |
| LoveAbhi chapter 1 . 10/15/2015 awesome awesome :D :D |
| BT chapter 1 . 10/15/2015 Hahahaha Waise bhee Daya ne itna mehnat Kia ki bill Abhi ko hee Deni chahiye paise Ka part bhee (devil smile) Waise paise Ka idea zabardast tha ( claps) The idea is superb and the way Daya helps out is so sweet Par bache se itna kam karwaya awe Haina galat bat Hehehehe Thanks a lot |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2015 Too gud . Keep writing baccha. God bless u. |
| shalu chapter 1 . 10/15/2015 wonderful story. U writes really good. Thanku for such a cute story. |
| kirti chapter 1 . 10/15/2015 hey hi dear kaise ho a refreshing os of duo maza aa gaya it was enjoying bichare daya sir unke pet mein kuch rehta hi nhi and last sach mein laga ki daya sir pay karenge :-) |
| priya chapter 1 . 10/15/2015 Very nice... |
| shruti chapter 1 . 10/14/2015 Nice story... liked daya 's love nd concern for abhi... nd last part was too hilarious yr... hehee... daya is daya... waiting for next story... |
| Angelbetu chapter 1 . 10/14/2015 Wooooooooowwwwwwww Hahahahahahahaha Sach me bohot hi wahiyat joke tha wo Lovely os dear nice nice superb Mja aa gaya Smiling in the whole os Very nice dost |
| Mystic Morning chapter 1 . 10/14/2015 thnk u giving such a nice time passing opportunity :) |
