| Reviews for stolen kisses |
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Guest chapter 13 . 9/25 Upddaaaate please! |
Saki-Hime chapter 13 . 8/3 It is a very good story, can't wait for more. |
Bloodred 321 chapter 13 . 7/30 Cant wait for more |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/28 This is so good! Please keep updating |
silviaw chapter 13 . 7/27 Sasuhina forever love it |
NejisHime chapter 13 . 7/27 Oh my this is getting sooooooo good. I loved that you made Hinata stop because it would be wrong to use Sasuke like that, shows so much maturity. Really can't wait to see where you take this, honestly I am on the edge of my seat. |
reneelg1963 chapter 13 . 7/26 I think you're doing just fine. Keep up the good work! |
LB Cat chapter 13 . 7/26 I likeee it. Please continue. Sometimes by rewriting the piece, it loses its rawness and emotional impact. As if it is sanitize. Thanks |
Guest chapter 12 . 7/26 :0 no dejes que Sakura la lastime, eres su pequeño dios creador de su universo |
Annalynnee chapter 12 . 7/25 I am really confused. So Hinata is sad in this chapter because Sasuke mentioned that Naruto never looked her way? I'm sorry but did I just imagine the chapter where Hinata watched Naruto get down on one knee and ask Sakura to marry him? You seem to be repeating it a lot that Hinata is sad that Naruto doesn't notice her or that he doesn't love her back your never bringing up the fact that he has made a commitment to another so I have to ask why you are never bringing that up when you have Hinata pathetically depressed over him. A few spelling and grammar mistakes don't really bother me bit it is difficult to see how Sasuke and Hinata are supposed to enter in to a relationship when there is no development what so ever on them. Hopefully the next chapter has more development for them |
DAngel7 chapter 12 . 7/24 Oh, the ending of the chapter with Naruto and Sakura was big surprise. I kind of felt it was out of nowhere .. but life is unpredictable. Can’t wait to see what happens between Sasuke and Hinata, and when will Hinata finally realize Sasuke’s feelings. Can’t wait to read more. Thank you for writing and sharing. |
cespericueta35 chapter 12 . 7/24 are you going to finish this |
LB Cat chapter 12 . 7/24 In this story is Naruto just loving the Chase for Sakura, as Hinata is like a doormat. Same with Sasuke as Hinata is not into him and sakura is. Awesome. Thanks. What does it mean story is not part of archive so can't make a review? |
Guest chapter 12 . 7/24 As I am one of your original readers of this story before you started rewriting it I have to tell you sweetheart, you have a fantastic story but you are rushing far too much. This chapter alone could have been spaced out a lot more. Especially with the tension between Naruto and Sakura being in a relationship yet clearly wanting to be with other people. Also, you need to go back to your early chapters and edit. You had Hinata as an anbu in like chapter 4... Now she's training to be a jonin? We all love your story sweetheart and the ones loyal to it will wait longer for an update. Stop rushing and plan put the chapters more. Give us more details and I know that Hinata is a very gentle person but you need to give her a backbone. It's a constant repeat with her feeling sad about Naruto and holding onto hope. She watched him PROPOSE to another woman! That's a time when you say, it's time to forget about him. I don't mean to be rude or mean. But everyone who reviews just asks for a new chapter and that is not helping you. |
Guest chapter 11 . 7/22 Moooorree! |