So sweet! I think I noticed a mistake in there somewhere but now I can’t remember it, so it mustn’t have been all that important ; ) almost wish there were a few more chapters or paragraphs in the middle to build up to Obito doing his thing but I know you said that’s not how you wright- really great, I love it! Wish I had some nin kin to tear up my imaginary enemies

Cuuuuute. Great fic!

I seriously cried tho : this was way too good man

Loved the story ¡

Really good story! I’d try and write a bit more than that usually, but it’s 4 am and I’ve just awaken from a nightmare so my mind is a little frazzled. But nonetheless, it was a great read.

Really great story. Only wish you had written the fight scene. I am always looking for this type of whump story and u really delivered!

LOVED this

omg this was good. im glad its all over those stubborn boys

im glad its over.

aww crying please livw

oh god obito you idiot. and i like how pakkun is thinking what i thought

oh god seriosly catch the bastard

oh god at least hes up

what the fuck he was trying to avoid this and this happens to him

oh man we need to kill this bastard. and hopefully they find the culpritm whats in kakashis hand