this is really interesting so far and i'm curious to see how things go later, so i hope you update this! i like it a lot!

Great chapter!
I'm really curious who ANBU Monkey is though because they have been in the last two chapters.
I'm also interested to find out more about Hayami's eye dojutsu. It sounds kind of like the Byakkugan.
Can't wait for the next update! Please update soon!

Shikamaru is so cute! Also I really like how you jump from one perspective to another, it really gives a better understand of the different character' thoughts. Though sometimes I had difficulty keeping up with which character's perspective it currently was.

Great start so far! I really like the descriptions but some parts are a little lengthy and harder to digest. But I can't wait to keep reading!

Great chapter can't wait to see more. Plz update soon.

Looking good so far.

I am loving this story! Your descriptions and pace are en pointe! I can't wait to read more!

This is awesome please update soon i cant wait to read the next chapter please hurry

another great chapter, i like how the inuzuka clan was close to the Ryoshi clan. it makes a lot of sense, though to be honest i was hoping she would end up living with the Akimichi's but this works out just as well.

Awesome chapter! I can't wait to see how Shikamaru and Hayumi get along later _ Great write.

This is an amazing story. .. please continue I wish to know what comes next

Holy cow this is incredible, it's amazing! I love this story so far, please update soon it's awesome :D

OOOOO! Love your story thus far. Can't wait to read more. Have fun writing. _

This seems really interesting so far! And I kept finding myself laughing at certain parts, especially about the window and some things that Gorudo said. Gosh, now I want my own snarky tiger summon! Keep up the good work! :D