I really like Jinx's character so far. She's amazing! The characterization is awesome and I love a badass female character.
I feel like things move too quickly and why did Jinx and Frost lay low for so long?
Anyway, hope you update soon!
-Hawkeye33
-Over and out

Interesting, but 141 shouldn't have been captured so easily and the beginning isn't well put together. (Chapter 1)