AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA GREAT IDEA

Beautiful! Wonderfully written! Brava! *applauds vehemently*
I love how you took the origin story of Mary Sues, or "Maria Susare", if you want to be more technical. Poor Doctor...but of course Loki would be the one to cause him misery whenever the chance presented itself. I wonder how Loki even managed to find a Mary Sue in the first place...
Just out of curiosity, what does PPC stand for? I've never heard of that agency.