I hope you continue this story cuz it just got interesting and you just stopped?

Story ok.. just wondering what your OC level is.

me like

So, is this dead yet? i'd like to import your OC unto my own story if you dont mind

Is this a Sora No Otoshimono crossover? regardless, it has been pretty nice so far, but IIRC, Ainz tried to message anyone when he could, and successfully spoke to Sebas Tian, so [message] was working right. If you say that Ava was a guild member, shouldn't she had gotten a [message] as well?

And if she's medium-to-high level like the fact she sunk a guy's face in with a mild slap seems to suggest, shouldnt she have been surprised by how NOT tiring clinging to the wagon was? and if she didn't know she was strong, shouldn't she have been much more worried when the thief tried to grab her? the character has too many inconsistencies. Either she knows she's strong, or she doesn't and should react in a more realistic manner. Please make up your mind.

Well, I hope she learns where she stands in the food chain soon. She can be mid-low level and still tower over normal people, after all.

Just wondering, but how much does the cloak hide her? you've mentioned that she made holes for her wings, AND that her wings are hidden under it. One or the other, please. Are the wings poking through or aren't they?

Is she idiotivallyy brave, since she was cool and collected when armed men she did not know she would be strong against tried to grab her, or is she worried about her own strenght, like when she gave up her spear?

Once you decide one way or the other, I think this will be a fun read.

I love it!

Keep up the Fantastic work.

Oh! I hope she gets her spear back ~

Hmm does she have any powers

Interesting. Keep it up! :)

I don't see many mistakes. Then again, I admit I breezed through this.

So far it looks good, though Ava shouldn't have given up her spear. Her "Men" comments make her seem very, well, anti male from what I've seen. Probably has dealt a bad hand when dealing with men. And she could have taken out all the bandits and not suffered any losses.

Anyway she is Heteromorphic race, so Momo may possibly go easy on her.

I have a similar idea like this... Feel free to get in touch with me of and when you can.

Anyways, seems promising. We have polar opposites going on her. An Angel girl being Momonga's weakness, and Momonga having all the resources he has at his disposal.

Really? Just give a very powerful weapon away? to what most likely be a group of extremely weak humans. I understand that shes being careful, but that's just going to far.

The fact that she just gave up her weapon after realizing that she could kill a man with a single punch is a major deterrent to continue reading. I understand that she was being cautious because this is a new world, but that was going too far. Now i'm confused if she is actually gullible and innocent or the smart, deceiving individual you make her out to be in her personal thoughts.

Why the hell did she give him the spear?! Their bandits meaning they're the bad guys. Plus she's an angel. It's their fault for attacking someone. They should know that they'll die by doing bandit stuff.

She better get that spear back.

How she traded a possible divine class weapon to a bunch of thugs is incomprehensible, dumb, naive and utterly retarded. She could have beaten those men easily and moved on but no it had to end like this.

How she didn't realize she has that kind of STRENGTH should have been an indication that she can curb stomp them all. If this was sex, this would be a complete turn off. Pardon the comparison though.

This is just as bad as canon Overlord Maruyama, she's worse than Momonga/Ainz at being paranoid. Now look at what happened. If Ainz was like this in the light novel I would have dropped it, which I will on this story. But one measly reader wouldn't be much at all just giving out a review/rant.

anti-climatic to the max, but at least there was a fair reason for it.

It was just a simple case of her overestimating her opponents, and underestimating herself.

I can't really see the logic of her breaking a mans neck to be a "lucky" hit though. Considering she could cut down an entire tree with one swing of her weapon in the first chapter.

Despite how easy anime make it looks, shit like that takes some real muscle power to go through.